| Reviews for My lover ghost |
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   Seon Uzumaki chapter 7 . 10/21/2023 Dude this story could have been fantastic but there's a lot of mistakes in this story. First Momo was a girl and now then mentioned as a boy. Who tf was Arashi? And why he was called Naruto's half brother? And also the way you write the phrase from each character,many times it's literally damn confusing to figure out that which character is exactly talking. Use this method as my recommendation Suppose person A wants person B to know about his chemistry exam result and person B asks it. ''Hlw B,do you want to know the result of my chemistry exam'' Person A said. '' Yeah sure,I would love to know'"person B replied. |
| gummy b3ars chapter 10 . 6/14/2015 continue pls |
| llazo4108822 chapter 9 . 9/29/2013 I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters please. |
| llazo4108824 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 I love this fanfic so please make more chapter of this fanfic. |
| Zuki 217 chapter 9 . 2/19/2013 This chapter is awsome how will hinata come back alive if they try to seal her and what is going to happen to naruto and kyubi. If hinata comes back to life will her and naruto be together right away or is naruto gonna have to suffer a little bit for hinata to forgive him and then finally be together and defeat the demon eater |
| IncessantNovember chapter 1 . 2/18/2013 Remake the summary, it's very confusing and hard to understand |
| Zuki 217 chapter 7 . 2/2/2013 This story is awsome hope u update soon |
| mardocheline chapter 3 . 8/1/2011 well dame if this was going to be OOC you should of given us a heads up_ don't get me rong its a little of,but its ok to a tence but ok(/_)\ |
| bakugoslittlewhore chapter 7 . 4/28/2011 *clap clap clap* ur back! |
| Soulsercher996 chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 okay...this is awful...I am deeply sorry,but I can't read this anymore... I tried giving it a chance,but its awful...Naruto is not like that...and neither is Hinata...Or Sakura...I suppose your native language is not English...you need to study more..or I don't know but this is just horrible...the theme is not bad,but still...WAY TO MUCH MISTAKES |
| ANGELA chapter 1 . 12/29/2010 thats fucked up! omgg but hes still decides to be with hinata in the end right? i love it btw. xx |
| anime loca chapter 5 . 7/27/2010 plz make more chapters, its really good! |
| JaMisa27 chapter 5 . 6/29/2010 holy shit i feel the climax coming lol |
| JaMisa27 chapter 2 . 6/29/2010 lol kyuubi making more since then naruto! and he almost destroyed a whole freakin' villiage! |
| Loungyoo chapter 2 . 11/27/2009 Okay I understand the plot and I like it but does Hinata really needed to get raped? That's the thing that bothers me. But the story is good. |