Reviews for Tension from Economy
Bliss714 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I like how you expanded on this scene, giving the reader a deeper glimpse into what was going on between the unsaid words. I especially liked the "watching"...

"Oz was watching Angel, to be sure he was Angel, to observe a vampire up close, because Oz was at heart a predator. Angel was watching Oz, to be sure Oz watched him, because he'd never been friends with a werewolf before, because Angel was just as much a predator as Oz was. And the watching created tension. And the tension caused more watching. And the watching meant that they knew exactly the way the other one moved, had intimate knowledge of the way the muscles under the layers of clothes and skin worked, knew exactly what mood the other was in just by how the fabric of a shirt shifted. And that created more tension."

Nicely done.