|Reviews for A New Destiny|
| Guest chapter 45 . 3/13
Wtf. This is seriously where you leave us.
I cannot wait for this epic battle between these new ninja, who I'm guessing are oruchimarus hench men. One has iron powers, one I think controls the ogres (with clubs like in Harry potter :p) with her flute (though I'm still confused as to why they were attacking the lighthouse if you said afterwards that they were after Sakura), one used spider webs (I'm also confused as to why Sakura was randomly dragged forward by it and as to how she got free). But anyway. I love how her flute suddenly had insects in it and that was how we found out the others came to their rescue. I loved that.
I also loved the logic behind figuring out the boars using the lies. It was brilliant (albeit a little confusing at times).
And I LOVED that scene between kakashi and asuma! I don't know why but I just loved it. It was written so so so well. Perfect. The flow was amazing. The wit in their dialogue. The effect of cigarette and asuma sharpening his blades. UGH. And that relationship with kakashi and Anko is soooo HOT. I love it. And you even connected ankos past as to why they are only friends with benefits. It's perfect.
I'm also curious as to how naruto and Sasuke and chouji are doing but I guess I'll have to take your word for it that they are fine.
| Guest chapter 44 . 3/8
LOL Pobrecita. I just read your little explanation about dynamic marking. I'm still laughing at you :p it really wouldn't be too difficult to change "he vomited on sakura's arm" to "he peed on sakura's arm."
Letting the characters say what happened is a very good technique. I like it. It's just confusing when you have to wait for an explanation. Like at the beginning of this chapter. You ended last chapter saying the others had to return to Konoha and then this chapter begins on a beach in a random village with no explanation until Shikamaru comes back with two random people who provided food and blankets.
Also Sakura kept referring to "the mission" but she isn't on a mission.. That was kinda confusing too. I dunno.
And I don't know how Kiba possibly continued with two fractured arms. But it was sooo cute when Sakura stopped using the honorific and he noticed :p all he had to do was come close to dying. It was that "simple!" LOL
I also loved Shikamaru possessing the sand. That was cool.
And you made it a point that hinata wasn't using gentle fist or byakugan. What was she using then?
Sorry for being so confused :p it's hard figuring out what I should just take at face value and what I should read into.
One more chapter!
| Guest chapter 43 . 3/8
OMG. Wow. That was so trippy right there... I seriously couldn't tell if Sakura was under genjutsu or not OMG. I still don't know if I believe it. I guess I'm gonna have to.
Sigh :( and poor lee and Kiba. That really was rash of Sakura to run off like that. I get her point but now that it sort of backfired... Oof. And I'm also confused about the note now. Who really did write it?
And I don't like that explanation of all of this being "a happy coincidence"
I guess I must read on
| Guest chapter 42 . 3/7
Haven't read this in a while. Things seem pretty hopeless :( everyone is hurt and separated.
Kiba's story was sad :( I love animals too. So so much. And I'm so happy Akamaru followed him that night. Animals rule.
And omfg why did Lee do that? I couldn't even bear to think about it... He'll never be able to fight the same way again if he's deaf :( that broke my heart
So I hope this review actually posts as me and not as a guest. My stupid phone app -_-
| Guest chapter 45 . 2/25
| Guest chapter 45 . 2/25
Updateeeeeeee pweaseeeeeeee *puppy dog eyes*
| Aquos35 chapter 45 . 2/15
Wha... that's a great cliffhanger you left there... Update kay?
| Aquos35 chapter 35 . 2/15
-and it would be even more sadistic that I actually enjoyed the torture scene. I have a sick mind sometimes. hahaha
| Aquos35 chapter 33 . 2/15
Now that's what I call a plot twist!
| Aquos35 chapter 15 . 2/15
This is seriously heartbreaking. I mean it.
| Aquos35 chapter 2 . 2/15
This story is getting really interesting here. It's very detailed, which is a good thing.
| Stand bi me chapter 41 . 2/5
I hate to say this but I'm confused :( am I supposed to know what these hogs are?
Also is dosu under some sort of jutsu or did I misread something?
And fml but I don't remember who kin is :( please don't hate me. Was she just the other ninja on the team during the chunin exams?
Also I feel like it was way too lucky that sakura's inkling was right on point about Sasuke being in danger on this particular mission rather than on any other one if zaku escaped the prison a long time ago.
On a different note, I love how pieces of the puzzle slowly came together. First they encountered the hog. Then the lady who explained Saske's mission in relation to the hogs. Then the scarf that told them choji was there. That was brilliant.
I hope things make more sense soon! I'm a horrible reader :(
| Stand bi me chapter 40 . 2/1
My heart just broke for naruto. He loves Sakura but knows she prefers Sasuke. I'm glad Shikamaru got to speak to him :(
As for tsunade and Diasuke they are definitely keeping something from Sakura. And she is crazy to run off with the others to go find Sasuke. Tsunade did have a point that the guy escaped a long time ago and Sasuke has been on missions since.
| Stand bi me chapter 39 . 1/30
So much tension in this chapter. OMG. I hated that fight in the show with naruto and Sasuke on top the hospital.
Also that conversation between Sakura and Ino on the walk home was so awkward at first. Then when they finally started talking, I swear talking to Sakura was like talking to my cousin Nicole. Sounded exactly like her. Word for word.
Also it was so cute Sakura bought something for Sasuke. I thought she'd get something for naruto one time
And OMG that note was SO ominous. Wtf. If I was her I would run back to the hospital. Fuck no I would NOT stay in that house fuck that.
Also I'm guessing kabuto wrote it? I'm probably wrong... /: I'm so bad at remembering things :(
| Stand bi me chapter 38 . 1/27
Oops. Forgot to review this chap after I read it.
The story with the sun and moon was cute. I really liked it. And I love how Sasuke liked it too. It was told beautifully.
And that almost-kiss at the end! The actual pre-kiss part was written BRILLIANTLY and so sensually. I liked it. But the post-"kiss" was written kind of clumsy. I love what happened, it was cute. But the way you made Sasuke fall on the floor and then you went back and explained was happened was kind of confusing. And I wish they did kiss! But the way you made it not happen was cute and smart. Definitely something I'd expect from the series.
Yay to ramen flavored Girl Scout cookies!