|Reviews for The Picnic|
| ASianSuccessor2012 chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Oh this story was great! It was incredibly captivating and interesting and Chessy and Martin are so in character! Keep up the great work! It's nice to see Chessy and Martin's picnic scene since it was never shown in the movie, and it's great to see that you've made a portrayal for what was going on. I loved it! :)
| tumescentline chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Er, it IS Chessy, idiot under me.
| Wow really chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Wow that's dumb. Her name is Jessie not Chessy. Jess-ie. JESSIE! Chessy looks like cheese! Your so stupid not to notice!