Reviews for The Rain
Pirate Moose chapter 8 . 8/31/2009
Poor Tosh!

Please continue!

Designated Crowd Ninja chapter 6 . 7/17/2009
awesome, bit rushed in places, but awesome
sarah chapter 6 . 7/12/2009
I LOVE it, please update soon!
Clueingforluce chapter 4 . 6/23/2009
omg plz dont let tosh or gwen be hurt plz plz
CantThinkaNuffin chapter 3 . 6/22/2009
Really good so far. I hope that you're able to come up with more ideas to keep it going, 'cause I want him caught. Poor Tosh!
Kellogmonkey chapter 3 . 6/21/2009
this is getting good. i cant wait to see what owen is going to do. YAY! dark!owen. this should be good. thank you! _
EmptySequence chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
i really like this! please update again soon! :)
IndeMaat chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
It's nice to see a story with an important role for Tosh. I'm secretly hoping there is going to be some kind of plot twist that will mean she won't be bed-ridden for the rest of this story.

A few notes on punctuation though. Sentences need to end with a full stop or period. Dialogues need punctuation too. I could give a whole lecture on how dialogue needs to be punctuationed. If you're interested, let me know.
cjh4ever chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
Nice to see Tosh the action-girl, even though she ended in hospital. Please continue.
gabariera chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
please, please update soon, this is really good and it's such a good clifhanger!
Kellogmonkey chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
this is a good start. i'm excited about seeing more. though, owen isn't dead in this one is he? hope note. thank you! _