|Reviews for My Little Woman, or Mi Mujerita|
| debslmac chapter 2 . 2/4
| fatpotatoe chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
Wow, only 2 chapters; and already I feel like I am on a magic carpet ride. You convey such depth of language and emotions with your characters. Will you continue? The opera needs finishing.
| fatpotatoe chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Very good, and very interesting.
| SanguineTaurean chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
I should have paid attention to the dates on this and now I'm thinking the story won't go any further. I like it and definitely would read it. Just in case I will click on the follow button.
| SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
I love how your words projected me right to where Edward was and how he was feeling, hearing all the jungles noises. I even started itching! lol Now to see what ole Tanwhore is up to next. Yeah, she isn't one of my favorites in the fandom! lol
It just slays me how Edward feels like he made the most wonderful and selfless act by leaving Bella when, in fact, he turns into a martyr because of it. Either go back to her, throw yourself in a fire or move on without regret. And the other thing about the books/movies was how damned whiney, selfish and immature Jacob was. Both of those things really irked me then and still do! GAH! And now Tanya...what a piece of work. Sheesh.
| Songirl chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
Intriguing, tragic Edward in a magically decayed setting- the music an original character...portal of healing and pain.
| EdwardsMate4ever chapter 2 . 9/30/2011
It saddens me that you seem to have abandoned this lovely story. It is so detailed and descriptive - you've captured Edward so well, and I really enjoyed your OCs. I wish I could learn more about them, as well as see what Tanya was up to. I will put this story on alert in the hopes you will pick it up again one day.
| Raum chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Camilla10 recommended me your works, so here I am!
I liked a lot the way you described Edward's sorrow. Tanya is a bitch, but everyone already knows it :)
| msmargo chapter 2 . 6/9/2011
yes, of course we need some sex, but that means more chapters! surely you haven't abandoned this? ah well. lay/lie- everyone's downfall, do they not teach the difference any more?
| CindyWindy chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
The OC's of Mirabella and her grandfather were very well done!
I wouldn't want to read of Edward and Tanya together, so I'm glad she didn't show up yet.
I enjoyed this so much! Thank you for sharing your writing.
| CindyWindy chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
This was a powerful first chapter! The image of him on the jungle floor, hoping the foliage would grow up over him, his lists of self-pity and thoughts of her life, were all heartbreaking. He laid there unwashed with spiders living in his pockets for crying out loud! You convey the angst so very well. I hope you know this is an amazing (and I never overuse the word) amazing New Moon piece. Wow!
| robsjenn chapter 2 . 1/9/2011
i take it this story won't be continued, or at least is on the very, very, very far back burner? still, it's worth continuing it. your AU with tanya isn't improbable at all. i loved edward's thought patterns in chapter one; i love the imagery you've created or edward's abandoned mansion; and i was really touched by his interactions with mirabella and alberto. early 60s brazilian jazz/bossa nova would fit edward's melancholy perfectly.
btw, his guitar would be called "a mulherinha" - that's the portuguese translation.
| sisterglitch chapter 2 . 12/23/2010
You loved HP, and then you left him.
You loved E and now you've left him too...
you abandoned this story over a year ago.
Dare I ask what happened? New obsession?
I know, I'm a writer too. Life gets in the way. In order to write this stuff well, the rest of your life has to fall away and you give in to the obsession. Every mental moment not occupied by necessary evils, returns to your story, your characters that talk to you in your sleep - and waking too.
The house stays uncleaned, the bills unpaid, relationships fall away...
I'm very picky about my fanfiction, and you have captivated me with this story - La Mujerita. Classy, atmospheric, subtle...thank you.
I did read AAA, and appreciated it VERY much (especially the background on Edward from Tanya's POV), but THIS story is my favorite... The decadent ambience surrounding a desolate, beautiful Edward in the decaying mansion, and the Brazilian jungle - as alive and present and consuming as the Northern Pacific rainforest around Forks...His strange compulsion to pursue guitar, grappling at music finally as a last excuse to live. Magnificent.
I see others have begged you to continue...and yet you have not.
If the inspiration has gone, no amount of convincing will help...
but if there are still shadows and whispers of this story haunting your brain, give them a life and continue...will begging help? I'm not adverse to a bit of begging...
| jaylyn793 chapter 2 . 12/18/2010
i like this story so far, its good. so is this set during New Moon? is edward going to get back with Bella?
| lilac17 chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
Your story is really interesting! I'm Brazilian and I can help you with the Portuguese.