|Reviews for Fred's Gift|
| kittenclaws chapter 30 . 2/25
I just wanted to let you know that you are a great writer and I have enjoyed your stories very much. And if your daughter is half as talented as you then she will b great too just ignore people that leave bad reviews they are just jealous because everything that they write sounds like it was written by a dyslexic donkey that's nearsighted. If you give up then the haters win. Behind every successful person is a pack of haters. Never give up and never let them see you defeated because that's how bullies win. Enough of my rant you really are a awesome writer and I just wanted to say thank you for sharing your stories so thank you.
| Cheyenne chapter 1 . 2/6
I'm a mess. I knew he was going to die.. but.. damn I got really attached to the pair in one chapter. bravo. seriously. now bring Fred back please.
| Katie chapter 30 . 12/4/2013
Not much for George and Luna stories, but you might have changed my mind. Loved the story keep writing!
| PseudonymousPersona chapter 30 . 8/3/2013
I don't really know how to review this story.
I really enjoyed it, it was so emotional.
Its not what I usually read, but I did really like it...
I have decided I love George & Luna. Yes that's right, I have come to the dark side. I heard you have cookies?
Anyway, great story...
| Le Me chapter 30 . 4/11/2013
I'm speechless. I came across this story completely by accident and hands down it's one of the most heart-wrenching, beautiful and well written fics I've ever read. I had to read the whole thing in one fell swoop - it's now night time and I've missed dinner.
There're hardly any good 'George' fics out there, ones where he's properly portrayed like in this one. I really think you captured him perfectly - a gentleman with a fiery temper. I particularly loved the dynamics between him and Arthur, really had me laughing.
I was also pleasantly surprised when you described Fred's wand as 'Walnut and dragon heartstring' (a wand for an inventor/innovator), it's very refreshing that there are writers out there who also do their research into the HP universe, right down to the wand detail.
All in all I thought this was brilliant, and it would be a travesty for me not to re-read at every given opportunity. Bravo.
| The Devil's Warrior chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
This was a nice second chapter, very emotional driven but I will say this now, I have discovered a couple of typos, nothing to major, nothing that would disrupt the story but I might be wrong though, but I am pretty sure that I saw a spell without a capital letter. It is well written, filled with emotion but I am not sure to decide if the characters are in or out of character. I will read and review the next chapter when I can, I am busy looking for a job and writing my own fanfiction.
| everydayisagift chapter 7 . 10/9/2012
Ahahaha, Evanna and Oliver. That's so good. This story is amazing so far, can't wait to read the rest (:
| Cheap Trixie chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I cried at the end of this chapter! I CRIED. I'm REALLY looking forward to reading more of this!
| LittleBookOfCalm chapter 30 . 9/4/2012
Brilliant. Very addictive story, couldn't stop reading until I had read it all. Well written and a wonderful plot. Xxx
| Duckyhamiltonxx chapter 30 . 8/31/2012
This story is amazing and incredibly sad im just sitting here now crying! :S
| xSilentSakurax chapter 30 . 8/18/2012
Such a cute story! :)
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/28/2012
"Dad.." George stared down the table at his father. His angry mother on one side, his crying hormonal pregnant wife on the other. "...help."
"George." Arthur sighed and shook his head.
"You best start running
I love this! :D It makes me smile SO much!
| Saffy weasley chapter 30 . 5/28/2012
That was amazing, so well thought out and I could REALY imagine it all. If you ever get offered by queen J.K.R to make a film out of that do not turn it down. I felt like I was in the storie with them and my hart renched at every emotional moment, please do another following on from this one and make it as long and as beautiful as this. I cryed both with sadness and with happiness throughout the entire story and I will defenatly be re-reading this over and over. Thank you very very very much and please keep writing you have a talent do not squander it :) 3 x
| Saffy weasley chapter 25 . 5/28/2012
Oh my god the but with Fred was so beautiful I cryed all the way thought it and then when the light came down I started crying again . Very very well done. Absolutely beautiful 3
| Lola Weasley chapter 30 . 4/26/2012
This is the 10th time I'm re-reading this story. I just love it! PLEASE, write another George & Luna fic!