Reviews for Paris
Child of Music and Imagination chapter 23 . 3/25/2014
Why don't they try going to Hawaii?
Or maybe Egypt?
kerentrev chapter 33 . 8/1/2013
I loved the story! I read it all in just under two days. The plot was great, the way you flipped the roles for jake and Edward was great, I loved it all! There were however, two things that bothered me a bit.. One is Bella kept emphasizing over and over and over and over again how weak wolves are compared to vamps. That's the only part that rubbed me the wrong way.. Yes a newborn vamp is stronger than a mature one and even stronger than a wolf.. But wolves, even in human form are far more durable than you made them seem. They can easily hold their own, they are slightly more vulnerable in human form, but Jake and the pack were designed to kill the worlds greatest predators, they deserve far more credit than they were given. And the next one is just a preference.. I wish you would have ended the volturie and allowed the Cullen's to govern the vampire world, while they are helpful, arp is still raw evil. Other than that I really enjoyed the story very much.. Thank you for writing it. :)
Draco's Secret Lover chapter 33 . 11/25/2012
Loved it, loved the ending. The way you wrote the last few lines. This is an idea that I really love, the AU starting with that phone call scene. I've even written an un-posted one myself, but this is definatley one of the best ones. The longest, most well-thought-out for sure! I read a lot of fics, but I tend to be more of a lurker and don't review often, but I definately had to leave on for this. It's really under-appreciated based on the low number of reviews!
mharrison9101 chapter 33 . 10/2/2012
I have really enjoyed reading your story, especially these last two chapters. They are my favorite. Thanks for sharing :)
Violet Quinn Black chapter 33 . 2/11/2011
Omg so much power and emotion! Amazing! Simply amazing!
AugustFirst chapter 33 . 2/11/2011
that was how it ended? none of it made sense to be completely honest.

Um...okay then.
Violet Quinn Black chapter 32 . 1/2/2011
Omg! This chapter was just amazing! Your storie is sooo amazing! I don't want it to end!
BeccieT chapter 32 . 1/2/2011
It took me 3 days to read it but i am so glad i did. This has to be the best Jacob/Bella story i have read. It had me laughing hysterically in parts and crying at the last chapter. Beautiful. please do a sequel or another story, you are such a brilliant writer. Maybe a Bella/Sam story? Just a suggestion.
Penn Ames chapter 32 . 1/1/2011
I might have gotten a little lazy at the end of Ch. 32. (spoiler alert) There was going to be a short bit with Rosalie and Bella, where Bella explains: If Edward is around while Renesmee is growing up, then he will be like a second father to her, both in her eyes and his own. And that would preclude his ever becoming her lover. Vampires are not as maleable as werewolves; once Edward's feelings are set a certain way, they will never change. So Bella takes some rather drastic steps to give Edward and Renesmee a shot at future happiness.
AugustFirst chapter 32 . 12/31/2010
Didn't feel like logging in, that's my user name if you wanna send a reply though.

This chapter upsets me. I'm team Jacob, don't get me wrong, but Bella treats Edward absolutely unfairly. Don't you think Jacob should have a say in this as well? He didn't even enter that part of the story. It's his kid too, and i'm sure as a person who know what imprinting's like, he would be absolutely against this. To make someone forget the bond so the mother can be selfish? Bella's selfish and I'm really confused by this whole chapter because of that. I like your story, but this just...doesn't seem right. At all.
unknown chapter 32 . 12/31/2010
Love the story..but you through me for a loop when you basically killed off Claire...is there gonna be a way that she makes it through? the pack has already suffered enough with their losses.
Louise M Frost chapter 30 . 11/21/2010
sorry I haven't commented before now.

I have just been plowing my way through enjoying it.

now I have to say noooo I just got to here & there is no more...so sad...really need to know what happened, how was the fight, have Bella & Jake tried for another baby maybe she could? what about Leah? what about Edward? so many questions...
JacobAPotter chapter 30 . 8/28/2010
I really liked the convo between bella and edward about nessie and the nature of the imprint. Good to see the packs merging before the big battle and I wonder if alice saw a future where ed doesn't die.
bella-cullen1989 chapter 30 . 8/23/2010
some big stuff is gonna go down...
SinIsMyPleasure chapter 6 . 8/9/2010
Waiitt...why was Edward freaked out when she said;

'"Ugh, I wish you guys would come up with better terminologies. 'Newborns?' 'Three month olds?' They make me sound like a pervert!" I thought humor would be better than trying to lie or just staying quiet. But Edward whipped his head around to stare at me in horror.'

I LOVED this line:

"For one moment, I wasn't defending my Bella." He paused and said even softer, "I was defending my kill"

I was like 0.o. I like how you came up with that idea, it's creative and no one has ever used that idea before! If i would have read that in the actual book, i would have been stunned, much like i am now.

This story is awesome so far, so im going to go back to reading it.(:
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