Reviews for The Fallen Master
Shinbi-teki chapter 3 . 5/17
The story so far is quite good and progressing well, though, I'd really like to see your characters develop more; its plot is intriguing and almost instantly pulled me in, though, I wish you'd Beta Read this since the grammar and spelling is not perfect, you could correct it yourself but why not have someone else do it for you. Anyways that's that and I'll send another review soon.
aj2554 chapter 18 . 5/20/2016
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 5 . 4/19/2016
Ash getting that Puss.
RedAuraGuardian chapter 11 . 1/18/2016
Shes from Celestic Town you IDIOT
pichu missionary chapter 18 . 9/27/2015
It was just getting to the good part too. I hope that one day, you'll finish this.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/17/2015
Please update
Michaelkoc1 chapter 3 . 8/10/2015
The English in this story is so bad i almost think uounare doing it on purpose.. Its just horrendous!
The writing is a little silly as well but honestly i like the idea of the story so far
But it needs a beta soooo badly
CookTheCrook22 chapter 18 . 5/19/2015
So are you just going to forget about this amazing story you wrote? It's kind of sad knowing that.
MEWTWO is awesome chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
More now
Ruby097 chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
if author is reading this despite of being three years you can still update
haxorous chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
just one question: what is the name of the story that comes before this one that is if there is one
Ace of Spies chapter 11 . 7/24/2014
I think Cynthia is from Celestic Town.
Arceus08 chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
Nice story
nobody chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Joseph Hendrie chapter 19 . 5/15/2014
i think this story of the fallen master that has 18 chapters well its one of you most best story you have done . well who will ash love out of his new friends ? and about the war what is that about and how about ash former teacher will he come back ? and what about ashs mother will ash forgive her and what about elena death will his former friends find out about it and will they say something to ash it ? well i hope you reopen the story of this story beacuse you were great with this one
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