|Reviews for The Fallen Master|
| aj2554 chapter 18 . 5/20
I LOVE YOUR OC's
| Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 5 . 4/19
Ash getting that Puss.
| RedAuraGuardian chapter 11 . 1/18
Shes from Celestic Town you IDIOT
| pichu missionary chapter 18 . 9/27/2015
It was just getting to the good part too. I hope that one day, you'll finish this.
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/17/2015
| Michaelkoc1 chapter 3 . 8/10/2015
The English in this story is so bad i almost think uounare doing it on purpose.. Its just horrendous!
The writing is a little silly as well but honestly i like the idea of the story so far
But it needs a beta soooo badly
| CookTheCrook22 chapter 18 . 5/19/2015
So are you just going to forget about this amazing story you wrote? It's kind of sad knowing that.
| MEWTWO is awesome chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
| Ruby097 chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
if author is reading this despite of being three years you can still update
| haxorous chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
just one question: what is the name of the story that comes before this one that is if there is one
| Ace of Spies chapter 11 . 7/24/2014
I think Cynthia is from Celestic Town.
| Arceus08 chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
| nobody chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
| Joseph Hendrie chapter 19 . 5/15/2014
i think this story of the fallen master that has 18 chapters well its one of you most best story you have done . well who will ash love out of his new friends ? and about the war what is that about and how about ash former teacher will he come back ? and what about ashs mother will ash forgive her and what about elena death will his former friends find out about it and will they say something to ash it ? well i hope you reopen the story of this story beacuse you were great with this one
| doubledamn chapter 5 . 3/26/2014
I wonder if Ash has routine to Lugia's Song...