Reviews for The Fallen Master
aj2554 chapter 18 . 5/20/2016
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 5 . 4/19/2016
Ash getting that Puss.
RedAuraGuardian chapter 11 . 1/18/2016
Shes from Celestic Town you IDIOT
pichu missionary chapter 18 . 9/27/2015
It was just getting to the good part too. I hope that one day, you'll finish this.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/17/2015
Please update
Michaelkoc1 chapter 3 . 8/10/2015
The English in this story is so bad i almost think uounare doing it on purpose.. Its just horrendous!
The writing is a little silly as well but honestly i like the idea of the story so far
But it needs a beta soooo badly
CookTheCrook22 chapter 18 . 5/19/2015
So are you just going to forget about this amazing story you wrote? It's kind of sad knowing that.
MEWTWO is awesome chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
More now
Ruby097 chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
if author is reading this despite of being three years you can still update
haxorous chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
just one question: what is the name of the story that comes before this one that is if there is one
Ace of Spies chapter 11 . 7/24/2014
I think Cynthia is from Celestic Town.
Arceus08 chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
Nice story
nobody chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Joseph Hendrie chapter 19 . 5/15/2014
i think this story of the fallen master that has 18 chapters well its one of you most best story you have done . well who will ash love out of his new friends ? and about the war what is that about and how about ash former teacher will he come back ? and what about ashs mother will ash forgive her and what about elena death will his former friends find out about it and will they say something to ash it ? well i hope you reopen the story of this story beacuse you were great with this one
doubledamn chapter 5 . 3/26/2014
I wonder if Ash has routine to Lugia's Song...
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