Reviews for The Fallen Master
Michaelkoc1 chapter 3 . 8/10
The English in this story is so bad i almost think uounare doing it on purpose.. Its just horrendous!
The writing is a little silly as well but honestly i like the idea of the story so far
But it needs a beta soooo badly
CookTheCrook22 chapter 18 . 5/19
So are you just going to forget about this amazing story you wrote? It's kind of sad knowing that.
MEWTWO is awesome chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
More now
muzafarmansoor97 chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
if author is reading this despite of being three years you can still update
haxorous chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
just one question: what is the name of the story that comes before this one that is if there is one
Ace of Spies chapter 11 . 7/24/2014
I think Cynthia is from Celestic Town.
Arceus08 chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
Nice story
nobody chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Good
Joseph Hendrie chapter 19 . 5/15/2014
i think this story of the fallen master that has 18 chapters well its one of you most best story you have done . well who will ash love out of his new friends ? and about the war what is that about and how about ash former teacher will he come back ? and what about ashs mother will ash forgive her and what about elena death will his former friends find out about it and will they say something to ash it ? well i hope you reopen the story of this story beacuse you were great with this one
doubledamn chapter 5 . 3/26/2014
I wonder if Ash has routine to Lugia's Song...
guest chapter 18 . 3/21/2014
this fic is sick, please continue
W0lfbr0ther chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Your an amazing author I love this story But I wish you would update.
Gold Testament chapter 18 . 2/18/2014
Lemon or not you should update soon, and I know all too well the pain of fans wanting you to update while you're struggling through college. Of course you have made me a fan of your story.
Gold Testament chapter 16 . 2/18/2014
Ooooh if Misty knew the truth and what a casanova he is now she would probably jump Ash.
Chris chapter 9 . 2/8/2014
Sorry to correct you but the word stays the same when plural

Great read though keep it up I love your fanfictions
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