Where's the rest? Dont leave us all hanging please!

Great lemons, very erotic, sensual yet loving are you planning on writing any more chapters, I didn't notice right away that it was a WIP hope you do, loving these boys

That was beautiful, really lovely writing, it was nice for them together after so many years of longing.

Wow, that was great and I forgot about Jasper's motorcycle. that's fun my husband had one when we were married, love motorcycles. Oh, yes, I seem to remember that shirt. looked very nice on him.

That was wow, hard to find the right words, glad that Jazz expressed his long-held feelings and insisted that they take their chance on love no matter what time they have together. Good chapter

That was sad, yet beautiful, tragic and so poignant. My guess is that despite Edward's feeling that it isn't fair to Jazz now, that Jasper has loved Edward for a long time, and that whatever time they have together, he will want to have.

I love how you tell a story! just sweet and loving and a new angle! excellent!

I love this story. I want to know if your still writing?

*sigh* I really just want to hug Edward and Jasper and never let go. I mean, seriously, how cute can you get?

ok so i absolutely love this story you have to continue it please and thanks for sharing your mind

Please update! It makes me so sad to think that Edward might die becuase of his cancer :( I feel so bad... You need to update so I can know what happeens next and if Edward lives!

This is such a beautiful story. I wish you could write more...

So started this story last night and I love it I cried, I smiled, and I laughed these boys are beautiful, so getting to chapter 5 was very disappointing when I found out the story had no end, not that I wanted it to end at this moment but it would have been nice to see the boys away with their friends and their friends reaction to the boys being together, then would have loved to have seen them move in together and how everything went with Edwards illness after that, would love to see this story completed...

Omg! I just found this story. Wow! Beautiful. It is tugging at my heartstrings and making me think what I would do if I were Jasper. I'm a scared little b**** and ashamed of what my response would be.

This is so well written. I just wanted to gush on you for a minute. I have been so IMPRESSED while reading this chapter. I really felt like I was right in Edward's apartment! His emotions are so raw and his fear of losing his best friend is so real. I absolutely LOVE it

Thank you for sharing this awesome story with us! Now on to chapter 2...

I don't even remember what I was looking for the other day but came across some of your older stories that I hadn't read. I decided to check this out and I'm so glad I did. This is such a beautiful and heartbreaking story. I'm so in love with these boys, they are just delicious (as another reviewer said, it's the most fitting word). It would be great if you were able to finish this story, but I would be fine if this is the way it ended. We got a couple of hot lemons, love, and no major heartfail. Thanks for this story.