Beautiful chapter- it's lovely to see these boys so happy at this moment.

*smiles through the tears* what a lovely chappie my sweetie...

wow just amazing...absolutely loved it, well written..cant wait for more though im saddened to see what might happen to edward

-jkp

My heart ached at the part where Jasper had the graffiti on his locker and was beaten up. People can be assholes! :(

I am so happy they have each other, especially during this difficult time.

excellent! Rather sad but yet hopeful. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

I just love J's accent.(the one I hear in my head as I read). Yes, I hear voices.

i think imma need to invest in some KLEENEX stock.

wow. my heart is just breaking. shattered. ouch.

please, please, please, keep with this story.

its magnificent.

xoxo, llb

Aww just beautiful. I loved this chapter.

The ride on the bike and the way Edward held on to Jasper, the way he had always wanted to. And their visit to Esme and Carlisle, so sweet. And oh my god their first time together...*sigh* So beautiful and tender and just so emotional. And not to mention hot...

that was so sweet and moving it brings a tear to my eyes. Edward and Jasper are adorable together. Since Edward and Alice are not siblings, are Bella and Jasper? or is she just a friend?. She was mentioned and i was just 't wait for more thanks for the update.

So good!

This story is amazing, yes it is.

I enjoyed your writing. Thank you.

hahaha just kidding, bb.

I don't know if you read my Alice article on TLYDF, but I have to tell you that I really like your Alice. She's energetic but not a spaz and that's so important to me. Alice was my second favorite Cullen when I read the books, and I can't stand the typical characterizations of her, so it was wonderful to see her as a mature adult.

Sigh. I really do like your Jasper. And Edward. And Carlisle.

Hell. I like your story's characterizations, in general.

And well ... guh for the lemon.

And ... can I request that that be what Jasper says every night before they go to sleep? "Tomorrow, darlin'" is such a hopeful phrase. It makes me like this: :D

Waiting for an update, bb.

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I'm still not sure if I will be able to follow through this story. The whole idea of possibly losing the love of your life so soon just makes me so sad and I was weeping after the "you are everything to me" -comment.

I will keep my fingers crossed and hope for a hea! Anything else would be just too crushing.

I enjoy you writting. Thank you

ou Nae that was great. Again I cried a little. Guess I should used to it right? :D well I don't care as long as I have some Kleenex beside me :D

I liked Alice in this chapter and the idea of taking picture of our boys together for the rough times...Can't wait to see some of them. (well read about how they look like if I have to be correct :D)

and LEMON:D yoho that was sweet making love :D I LOVED IT! squee! It was just beautiful. I especially liked the BEFORE SEX part :D haha the description of Jasper giving head to Edward was unforgettable :D

see ya next chapter

this story has made me cry so much already and I can't wait to read more.. the lemon was wonderful an thanks for showing such tenderness between jasper and Edward. Awesome job

i love these boys so much, nae... thank you for sharing them with us.