this was absolutely brilliant. beautifully written.

Really wonderful start. I love them both already. You set the scene and background very well. Looking forward to more :)

*sob* I can tell I will be sobbing through this whole story. *sniff* Looking forward to more.

wow. i applaud you. truly amazing chapter :)

damn, i should have headed your warning and gotten the box of tissues right away! Stopping to read was bad ;)

Really great first chapter, I loved pretty much every line of it, although it also made me so sad (which only proves what a fantastic writer you are!) It's really beautiful and heart-wrenching at the same time, so bittersweet and yummy ... and my review coherency is down to zero, sorry :p

Great job, can't wait for the next chapter, lots of support from me here!

Although your last line of the A/N confused me a bit, did you get bad reviews re story content before? I really wouldn't see why, for either of your stories.

Wow, just... Wow! I think this is going to become a story I will follow to it's completion.

Heartwrenching, sad, emotional, romantic...

Wow.

Oh god, these boys are going to be heavy on my heart for sure... but I'm in this with you. I'm looking forward to their journey.

loved it!

i can feel the angst to come with this story and i cant wait!

well lady, you've done it again...

you've captured my heart with one chapter. just want you to know that I will be hanging on to my seat waiting for updates on this one as well as ATDE.

which by the way was a fantastic update, i about cried along with Jasper at the end of their amazing lovemaking session.

you are absolutely fabulous and you write with great emotion and feeling...

thank you for your stories and please keep up the good writing.

love,

DJ Laine

Oh my goodness...I love it, how sad for the boys, FIGHT!

I enjoy a lot ATDE so I was happy to read another of your story, especially with my favorite couple : Jasper and Edward.

I find it interesting and very different of ATDE and very unusual with the theme: cancer. Awfully it's in many life today, my mother have one since March it's not the most nicely things but it's life and you have to fight.

thanks for the info, i hadnt read this story but i am glad you told be about it when you reply to my review for ATDE! also thanks for the warning about needing tissue, the first paragraph got me to cry so now i have a headache and am super tired from crying but this story is really good so far and i think i cried even harder when edward said what kind of cancer. you just had to go and pick one of the worst ones huh? okay i am putting you on alert so if i will know when you start a new story. i will also be reading the garden one that you told me about thank you and i look forward to the updates for both of your stories now.

I found this story today I saw a really great pic of jasper and Edward on the forum so I clicked on it and found this amazing story I love it.

WOW! That was amazing. I love this story already. I hope you will be able to update this one again soon. I really enjoy and appreciate your stories. I can't seem to get enough of these Edward/Jasper stories. There aren't too many good ones around. Thanks:)

god - i could read anything you write. i love these boys, love edward's emotional frailty, jasper's loyalty, this sweet hesitant exploration of what's been there for years, coming to bloom in the face of such a horrible prognosis. guh. looking forward to buying stock in kleenex.

xox