Reviews for Live Like No Tomorrow |
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msashlyjudd8 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 First chapter made me cry, I cant wait to read the rest. Great job. |
WingedGirlFlyLady chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Oh i love it. it has so much meaning it makes it all the better to read. |
overzealousbunny chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Awe Nae. Why do i feel like i'll need stocks in kleenex by the end of this. The buildup to the kiss was.. amazing. The backstory was perfect, I already feel so torn for Edward and his future. Can't wait to see what the other boys in your head have to say! |
CullenMysteri chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Aww, that was heart warming and breaking all at the same time. Really like the first chapter, can't wait to see more, can't wait to read more of at the deep end either, I love that story. |
SkyNic chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Wow and that was the first chapter. I am going have to get some tissue for sure now. I love ExJ stories, they are always so sweet...at least the ones I read. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
dannie7786 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 omg this was awesome! do you have an updating shedule for this story? cant wait for me! |
shelbyforeverlovely93 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 aw this is really good :) |
EdsperDrarrySnarrySlashFan chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 I will follow you to the ends of the earth on this one Naelany. Sad sad start though. Love the Tim McGraw song, just a slashy smutty country girl at heart I guess. :) |
mcsc2008 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Are. You. Trying. To. Kill. Me? Shit, woman! My heart beat like crazy the entire chapter. I'm still trying to catch my breath. I don't even know how to form coherent sentences about the powerful nature of this story. I can't even fathom how you can move between this world and ATDE's world. One chapter and I already feel like I've been run over. You ability to convey Edward's trauma and emotion is astounding. Thank you for sharing your talents. |
mhl1115 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 seriously, you know how many boxes of puffs i'm going to need to buy for this story? GAH! their kiss was so amazing and i love how edward declared his love at the end. he's definitely going to need jas to get through the long journey ahead. i can't wait to see how it all goes, girl! yay! |
Hollibell chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Oh, man! I'm gonna try, really really hard to stick this out! I love your other story, you are a brilliant writer, and this one has a beautiful beginning; I just have a real hard time with this type of subject matter. And if he dies...Gah, I would be unbearable for people to be around. Good writing and well written characters get into me and affect me, you know? But I love the beauty of this and the heart-felt emotions...As I said, I will read as long as I can bear it. Beautiful beginning! |
TabithaAbraham chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Holy hell but this just about ripped my heart out. Edward is so alone and afraid to let Jasper in his life. I was so happy when he called jasper and when he came over, but then I was worried that neither one would act on the attraction. Wow. So happy that Edward took the risk and kissed Jasper. I'm looking forward to reading more from these boys. Thanks for writing. :D |
SorceressCirce chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 You already know how much I freaking love this story and these boys. They've captured my heart right from the beginning, and I cannot wait to go on this journey with them. You did a fantastic job, and I am so happy to be working on this with you :) Thanks for sharing this, bb! |
Britt01 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Yes! Another E/J story! I love the sensitivity and tenderness you treat these characters with. And what a great back story you've created here. I like the little details you give too, like Edward setting the bottles aside for recycling. That sort of things make a story really feel real for me. And then the boys together, Jasper's support, everything win :) |
veddersgirl chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 Wow! What a really intense start. Loved it. Can't wait to read more. |