Amazing job! D

Hi, I just received an authors alert with an outtake of LLTNT and after reading it I had to read that as well and I loved the five chapters you've written so far. I follow all your stories and because this one hadn't been updated in so long I was wondering if you have abandoned it? I would love for you to finish it up, pretty please :-)

hope to hear from you soon, hugs from Spain

Usually I don't read story with this kind of subject, only because of the possible death of characters. I don't like it. What can I say ? I'm a very sensitive person, even toward fictional character ;)

But now I'm caught by your story and I truly love it.

I hope that you will be able update soon :)

Hi, I love this story. Wondering when you will update or if this is dicontinued? Hope it's not because it's so great!

*Sigh* This is so beautiful, bb!

I loved their talk about Jasper being the one to decide what to do medically, if Edward wasn't able to anymore. It's such an important but tough talk to have, you did a great job with it.

Jasper just knowing what Edward needs is so sweet and really shows how much Jasper cares about him.

Really great lemon - hot, but very loving.

The weekend in the mountains is going to be heartbreaking - I'm predicting tears.

Esme is so caring, making all his favorite foods.

When Alice started talking about taking their picture, I cried. *sniff* That was just really sad to me, and very considerate of Alice.

I love this: " Jasper noticed I was getting tired, though I'd been trying hard not to show it"

Very sweet and loving lemon. I love the playfulness between them.

Just a really great chapter, great job.

They are so cute and sweet together, even trough all the sadness.

You're doing a wonderful job with this.

I love the feeling this leaves me with, even if it's a sad one.

I'm so happy Edward has Jasper to lean on and hold his hand. They are very sweet together.

I understand Edwards reasons for being apprehensive about being with Jasper but I think Jasper got it right with this:

"How is it fair to either of us if we don't try, Edward? I could die tomorrow, so could you. The point is we don't know what lies ahead, not really. But I'll be damned if I'm going to let this chance slip through my fingers. If you die, I don't want to live the rest of my life regretting that we never took our chance at love. Would you honestly say that you'd want to die, without giving us our chance?"

We could all get hit by a car and die tomorrow, so why not take the change at love even if it's not forever!

*Taking a deep breath*

Wow! I don't even know what to say. There's so much emotion in this. You did a beautiful job of describing how he's feeling.

I finally got the nerve to start reading this story... i am so afraid of the outcome of the story but I am taking your advice and bracing myself for whatever may happen.

You have done a great job with this chapter, so emotional. *tears in my eyes*. it is so good. (as you know I love all of your other stories too.) Well, guess I will end this review so I can begin reading chapter 2...

i love this story! i hope you update soon!

Great story!

Update?

Aw they are so sweet to eachother. I'm glad that Edward has Jasper and they are talking about making things permanent. It makes me happy that in the midst of all the fear for Edward's health that they choose to be happy. Thanks for writing. :D

Love your story. Do hope you choose to continue it soon.

Fantastic chapter. I love how you've built such a fantastic story and that it's not just lemons for the sake of it. You've truly created some lovely characters in this fiction!