Reviews for Quiet Collapse
domina tempore chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
Aw! _ This was adorable! I don't even know how to describe it, but I'm giggling and grinning like an idiot right now, and I have warm fuzzy shivers all over the place. I am still worried about what's going to happen to her, though; and my question about the enzyme still stands ;).

I can't wait for more! :D
AthosionWarrior chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
update soon. cant wait for more. Teyla whump maybe hehehehe?
AlmostHeaven chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Interesting... Visiting Hoffa...I'm curious though..why no Beckett? He would want to help I would think...
domina tempore chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
EP! Oh my gosh, are you trying to give me a heart attack? Fabulous; I love it! :D I can't wait to see where this story is going to go...

Question. Even though the wraith didn't "technically" feed, did he start filling her with enzyme? Because that could be potentially very bad...

:D I liked that Ronon picked her up; very him, very cute. Made me grin big, like this _ or this :D (or both ;) LOL).

One thing, I think that the planet was just called "Hoff", not "Hoffa". I could be wrong though. Other than that, very *very* good; and I'm hooked either way! :D You two write beautifully together :). Keep it up!
Vana1970 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Nice start, interested to see where this goes.