Reviews for All-one
SeungSeiRan chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Ooh, I adore the sensualness of this lil' piece. I think it paints quite a beautiful image too; silver-haired boys glistening in the dark...

Ahem... yep, it makes for a nice picture :). This description here is so perfect: 'The darkness peters out to greyness and the lamplight fades as the horizon starts lighting up.' Plenty of implications for the future there.

Loved reading this and will definitely add to my faves.
Kaj-Nrig chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
It isn't bad, but it's funny that you don't consider incest to be worthy of a warning. Just saying.

But for a yaoi story, it's not bad. Certainly better than most, and the fact that it's super-short and written with more than a little bit of tact doesn't hurt, either.

Good job, for the most part.