Reviews for Just Another Failed Attempt
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Oh wow!That ended sort of unexpected,but i loved how Sirius teases him all the time!Good job!And the last paragraph too, there was so much tension there with the war and worries,good work really!
pageleaf chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Sad! Sad, but beautifully, wonderfully written. Except now I have to go read some RemusSirius fluff. Wish me luck. ;)
Memories Left Abandoned chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
I love it.

The ending killed me. "...Remus was completely alone." I wanted to cry (

And to pick a favorite kiss...the third. It was funny and hot and romantic and angsty and...oh. Yay.

Anyways. It was awesome, and I loved it.
GiantInflatableWalrus chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Lovely :] You captured Remus' and Sirius' characters perfectly. The ending was, while sad, excellent. Loved it :]
NasuadaNightstalker chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
I really really loved that!

I like in particular the way you wrote Remus, so realistic.

Well done!

Caketin :)
Vivsheryl chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Cute! I think its cool when people write about people's first kisses!