Reviews for The Wrong Side of Right
Torie Rilistkrytcat chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Oooh! If you're going to do more scenarios, can you please do one from Edward's point of view set before TRSOW when he makes the bet with Emmett? Pretty Please?

:) :) :)
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
I liked it...I think it would have been better if it had more internal thoughts of Emmett, but he doesn't really think before he speaks or it's pretty much perfect :)

Keep writing.
kimberlycullen10 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
im sorry it took me so long to read this! im all sorts of fail. but it was worth the wait - hilarious, mels!

"I passed out, my hand on top of my stomach, my head hanging off the back of the couch." -this image is so very emmett. i can picture it with no problem. haha :D

when he calls rose his "sweet little love-muffin," i thought of carlisle on account of the muffin man. *shakes head* see what you've done to me, bb?

"It was then that I decided I didn’t want this family dinner to end." -HAHAHA good technique, em. kimber's spin on things? "it was then that i knew things would not end well." *snickers*

speaking of technique, the sprinklers are WIN. nice move, rose.

What was most likely about two miles later, I saw Edward’s silver Volvo shining like a beacon in the night.

“Hallelujah!” I shouted with my hands high in the air.

-this seriously made me LOL for a solid five minutes until i could continue reading. hilarious!

emmett's prayer was adorable. i loved the way he rescinded his promise about the pranks as soon as he said it. i mean, at least he's realistic. ;)

wonderful outtake, mels! jackson is on his way for some celebratory funtimes. you're welcome. xx
ahizelm chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
O hai, Emmett. You're kind of a bonehead sometimes, but I suppose that's ok.

P.S. It's unlikely that I would have thrown something at your head, unless your tone was creepy. You gotta watch that stuff, man.
Sheeijan chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I know Rosalie has to keep Emmett on a short leash because otherwise he'd run amok like a toddler trapped in a man's body, but I felt the teensiest sorry for him here. Kicked out of your own house in nothing but boxers and a tshirt? No shoes, no money, no car... heh.

Funny though. Thanks for the outtake!
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Kaitlin13 chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
I like it a lot. This is a really good story so far and I can't wait to read more soon.
xXxlizardxXx chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
AH! that was quite funny! cant wait for more! keep writing!


rhodesl chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Thanks for the outtake. You almost have to feel bad for Em. It is like he does not know any better.
MasenCullen chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Just the thought of Emmett walking down the street in his boxers to get to Edward & Bella's house cracks my shit up girl. Kinda reminds me of Will Ferrell in Old School when he went streakin'... but Em's not nekkid... at least not this time. LMAO Can't wait for the update... dinner should b mighty interesting. ::snickers::
ash902 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Loved Emmett's prayrer at the end...can't wait to read more.