Reviews for Patience
Guest chapter 15 . 5/7
How is this complete?
Mandy chapter 15 . 5/5
OMG, best Bella/Jacob story I've ever read! It was so in character, and had just the right mixture of angst and fluff. Those lemons were particularly hot as well xD Thank you for writing such an amazing story!
lakeisha81 chapter 1 . 3/31
This has the potential to be a really good story. It just feels rushed and unfinished.
Mr Marmalade chapter 15 . 11/28/2014
I'm so happy that Jake could bang Bella like a porn star. Just lost her virginty a few hours ago and he';s doing her like a 20 dollar Ho'. Well at least he says nice things after he uses Bella like his own personal sperm bank. Maybe you need to lay off the porn before you write this stuff...Just sayin'
Guest chapter 13 . 11/27/2014
of the silliest things ive had to read in thetwi-fandom. Usually Bella is multi-orgasmic.
Maybe Dewards ice cold popscicle peepee would have anstithized her a bit. Way to make jake in a simpering asshole.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/27/2014
Bella is 18 freakin years old. They were what? Dry humping? Thats is really pretty...tame. And lame. I think Bella is just the tiniest bit frustrated after all the chaste kisses and "smoldering" looks with the corpse. Not to mention how can the corpse even compare to Jakes awesomeness! I think Bella needs to get laid. Now that will get her head on straight.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/27/2014
Jake should have told her to fuck off. what sympathy did she have for Jake. she told him she wouldnt play games with him and now she is. whats different about this than a million other fics with Bella dragging Jakes heart thru the mud? Jaake should not put up with this and the Jake we have come to know would NOT put up with her crap.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/27/2014
Pathetic. Truly. Pathetic. Dedward is what he is. A cold, manipulativge controlling, reanimated corpse. His fascination with Bella is because he cant read her mind. Unfortunately Bella IS ewithout a shred of courage and totally selfish and self indulgent. Edward is STILL manipulating her and BElla is STILL decieving Dedward AND herself about her feelings for Jake. Jake deserves better than this wacky little girl.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
I know you think you wrote something tremendously different but this is the same crap Bella is always spouting to Jake "my friend" blaa blaa blaa. Bella is a COWARD.
Nataliesmiley6 chapter 15 . 4/22/2014
Wow. Just... Wow.
alixandria chapter 15 . 3/9/2014
Damn!
alixandria chapter 14 . 3/9/2014
Whoa!
alixandria chapter 13 . 3/9/2014
wow
alixandria chapter 12 . 3/9/2014
Lol
alixandria chapter 11 . 3/9/2014
Lol...no protesting at all, good bella!
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