| Reviews for A Diamond in the Rough: Part 1 |
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   EndlessGloaming chapter 3 . 1/9 I'm surprised there was never any mention in the series of Rose working with children. Maybe she did earlier in her immortal life and found it unsatisfying? Still, I'm glad to see it in a fic. |
| harkie5 chapter 24 . 12/16/2024 Great story. I loved it and I can’t wait to read part two. Thank you for sharing. |
| spareoom chapter 24 . 10/24/2024 Oh this is so nice and heartwarming. Thank you for writing |
| Maria862 chapter 19 . 4/1/2024 Delighted by Bella's conversation with Edward on the phone |
| Maria862 chapter 17 . 3/31/2024 Oh, poor child... It must have been scary for Bella to see Edward try to attack her like that. |
| Maria862 chapter 16 . 3/31/2024 Oh, poor Bella... She was really traumatized... |
| Maria862 chapter 15 . 3/31/2024 Oh this chapter was so adorable, Jasper was so sweet, kind and caring towards Bella. It was captivating for Jasper to teach Bella how to read and her reactions were adorable. |
| Maria862 chapter 10 . 3/28/2024 It's sad that a father would do this to his daughter... At least now she will be safe, the Cullens have her now |
| Maria862 chapter 9 . 3/28/2024 I can't believe he broke her arm... How horrible, oh Bella... |
| Maria862 chapter 1 . 3/27/2024 Oh, poor child... |
| ThunderBuns935 chapter 24 . 7/25/2023 I just finished. it was absolutely heartbreaking at times, but I loved it so much. I'll be eargerly awaiting part 2. take all the time you need of course, but I hope you haven't abandoned it, it's been quite a few years since the last update. |
| Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 21 . 2/22/2023 I love this story so much. I've never read the original. I love baby Bella. I'm not a ExB ship fan so I will probably read all the stories until it takes it's turn towards an ExB ship. That's not to say I won't. if the story continue to intrigue me. I can be pursued to continue reading since I do love your writing. I hate that charlie is such a little shit since he happens to be one of my favorite characters, but I'm not opposed to reading an abusive Charlie. I just wished you'd let Rose kill him. or at least put the fear of vampires in him LOL. |
| henriquewaldenir chapter 24 . 2/15/2023 Please update again by posting part 2. I really want to see Edward and our little Bella come together |
| henriquewaldenir chapter 21 . 2/15/2023 Oh, I just smiled at the gift Edward gave Bella. It was thoughtful of him, a sweet gesture. With that, I can only imagine what their interaction will be like when he finally decides to come back. Please make this happen soon, I really want Edward and little Bella to interact. Let them be friends in person. |
| henriquewaldenir chapter 19 . 2/14/2023 My heart almost burst with passion with Edward and little Bella talking on the phone. Simply the best part of this chapter! |