Reviews for A Diamond in the Rough: Part 1 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am a mother and this kind of stories are always hard to read- but I read them for the amazing part of "comfort" after "hurt" Yes, sweetheart, an angel will save you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story was recomended on a Facebook site, was a great read, sad part 2 is not posted |
![]() ![]() ![]() She is ‘A Diamond in the Rough.’ Sweet, gentle and her father’s walking contradiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She is ‘a diamond in the roughsweet, gentle and her father’s walking contradiction. |
![]() ![]() this was absolutely beautiful. i was crying throughout most of it and just felt so many things. thank you for sharing this with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This whole story was absolutely lovely. Thank you so much for such a brilliant read. I started it last night and finished in at 10.13 this morning. Literally so good that I couldn't stop! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jasper always warms my heart omg |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi! usually they don't do the national anthem at school, but the pledge of allegiance. which is admittedly just as weird. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I told myself I'd never read this one ever again after reading it the first time...it makes me cry soo hard,to imagine a little child going through so much pain...but it's written so well and it just pulls me to read all the time urgh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great rewrite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving the rewrite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww. I must get up at near 5 am but i can't stop! This one was amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew, and loved, the Diamond back when you first put it online. I love this one even more! It is perfectly written, perfectly acceptable as procedures and so on, and just amazing! I love stories with a little, hurt Bella. I wanted so much in the canon for them to adopt a bunch of kids- I mean, all that endless love and endless money! Sigh. I suppose, that's what fiction is for, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please post the next parts! I love this story so much and I’ve been checking every day! You’re an amazing writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really impressive you took the time to edit this story years after it's posting. Congratulations on graduating college! (As a 4th year at UC, it's always neat to see who comes back to edit their stories as a college student!) I hope you're doing great things with that English degree! |