Reviews for Prelude
Manuela chapter 27 . 10/18/2016
Breathtaking. Like all the missing pieces falling into place and everything is hole again.
twiclare chapter 27 . 9/13/2016
Can't wait to move onto the sequel! Loved the story, thank you for sharing!
twiclare chapter 23 . 9/13/2016
Alice is juggling so many balls at once!
twiclare chapter 18 . 9/13/2016
Poor Alice, she must be driving herself mad.
twiclare chapter 17 . 9/13/2016
Things were getting a little steamy!
twiclare chapter 15 . 9/13/2016
Sorry, I've just realised I haven't reviewed yet! Loving the story so far.
Lyn chapter 26 . 5/1/2015
If you are as sexy as the words you write, you must be one hell of a wonderful lover.
Lyn chapter 22 . 4/30/2015
wow, that's all I can say
Lyn chapter 19 . 4/30/2015
Your story of the cullens fighting the new born vampires in the desert is so thrilling, I was fascinated by your skill in telling the story, it makes me want to be one of the Cullen vampires, so loving and caring as a family and for each other.
Shandeh chapter 17 . 7/21/2014
What a fun chapter! Marvelous!
TrillionSchiffer chapter 26 . 6/25/2014
It so foolish that They screw this up anyway.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 19 . 6/25/2014
Decent Battle. Em was getting his ass handed to him though. SMH

Rose and Jasper. Thumbs up. They handled their buisness.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 16 . 6/25/2014
Beautifully done chapter.

To be honest. I can't stand your bella and Edward...so im just skipping them altogether. Thier relationship and their shitty communication is too annoying. 99% percent of thier problems can be solved if Bella wasn't kept in the dark and edward wasn't so reserved.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 10 . 6/25/2014
Very interesting chapter. Love the creativity in the new characters.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 9 . 6/25/2014
BxE, their communication is terrible and reading them is like reading about a relationship on the rocks. Edward is an idiot and Bella is only hints at things just to give up on it before the 'ruins the mood'. Its horrible.

N E Way, next chapter.
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