Reviews for It's Just a Crush
Birdies chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29/2016
Haha! I really like your fanfiction; it's rare that I even read those things anymore. Now I think I'll start doing that again. I do, however, think you should work on your grammar a little more, and also use the "show don't tell rule" with everyone's action just a tiny bit more, especially from the beginning. Personally, I'm not fond with writers describing a character's personality in two sentences. Indirect characterization is much more effective. Besides all of that, this is great. Keep up the good w
TYSON chapter 45 . 12/18/2015
Great story. Do you have a sequel to this one because I feel like reading some more great Roxiri stories like this.
KingdomHeartsKeyBladeMaster chapter 45 . 1/31/2014
Soooooo I literally forced myself to not read all Of this story In one day because it was amazing and i didnt want to finish it..ahaha..but You did an amazing job writing this!..I may read this again tomorrow :3 but excellent job! One Of The best Ive read
christie700 chapter 45 . 8/4/2013
Just spent most of my day reading your awesome story! I love the detail and description you put into the story. I hope you write another Roxiri story someday :)
Thanks for a really great read, gonna sleep now lol
WolfieRed23 chapter 45 . 4/16/2013
Okay I have read this story so many times I've lost count! It's amazing in every way imaginable, from it being somewhat like real life and yet still being completely kingdom hearts to your amazing writing! I'm actually sad this is over and I'm secretly hoping you'll write a sequel or write another roxiri story and out of all of them this is my favorite! You are amazing and I love your style and creativity and realness! You're awesome and I love this story with all my heart!
Zack1187 chapter 44 . 4/15/2013
I love this story, this is my fourth time reading through this story, your writing style is so good, its literally the highlight of my day when i get to sit and read like four chapters in a row keep doing what your doing, and please update pressed lemons when you get the time
Ilessthan3KH chapter 45 . 1/8/2013
SO good! It's six in the morning but I couldn't stop reading, those last few chapters were addicting lol I'm so glad the couples are straightened out and happy! And thanks a ton for giving Xion a really happy ending! No doubts Axel will treat her better than Riku :D
And finally thank you for writing this in the first place. AND for finishing it! This is without a doubt a story I will be rereading :)
kataragurl27 chapter 45 . 12/20/2012
i love it wow so good
Stan chapter 24 . 12/5/2012
Sora is the most worthless throw away character ever. He is nieve and ignoren. And you should have marked this as sora and kairi. Not bloody Roxas and Kairi.
Ilessthan3KH chapter 9 . 10/28/2012
I LOVE this! I love the story, and I love your writing style, and I love that it's a long story, and I love that it's completed so I don't have to wait for more awesomeness! ;D
ArtOfStory chapter 45 . 8/30/2012
You know when I first started to read this, I thought it was going to be a cliche high school romance/drama story. And it turns out, it was. But it's the characters that were the driving force of the story. They were actually interesting and I really wanted to find out what would happen next. I ended up really enjoying this story. I can tell you're writing was improving from each chapter (not that it was bad). I can see this as a TV Series to be honest.
However I do have a few problems. At times, I felt like everyone always ran into the same problems. Not that's fine but it just happened too much (I bet I don't make sense) and I just took way too long to get to the solution of the multiple problems. Also, I felt Riku wasn't given enough time in the story, but that's not much of an issue. And one last tiny thing I noticed was the dialogue was a bit too cheesy as well as the humor. But it worked with the story that it didn't even matter. Please don't think bad of this review, it's just my thoughts. I actually really liked this story. Keep writing.
jorge perez chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
dear accident prone kluts can i make a suggestion? if u can please make a story with ventus and aqua in a school setting. i really like ur writting style and i havent read a good venqua stroy. I think if u write it the stroy would be awsome and have alot of great moments like this story
Amarie3713 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Hehehe... I'm the 669th reviewer XD

I believe that Roxiri is sooo adorable! (although nothing can compare to SoKai)

I like how everyone was portrayed and how nicely it was written.

Keep up the good work, and don't stop writing! :)
pokemonster chapter 45 . 11/9/2011
best story in the world
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