|Reviews for Breaking the World|
| DragonCurse4 chapter 1 . 6/18
Such a shame you grew bored of this after only one chapter. This could have been really good. :(
| WolfReaper75 chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
I think you should write more of the story. Don't just do one chapter!
| kyoukochan chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Hey! I finally found a story with Zagi and Tiz! Please update!
Cant wait and hope itll be awesome like this chapter but longer :P
| Amy chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
O_O Yes, more, please! I just finished the series today and need to heal my broken heart. You're off to a fantastic start!
| j chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
lovely more pleaz!
| ROSE PACHAEN chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
the stories realy short but i already can't wait for the next chapter.
| Mewdu chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
What? You stopped it there? Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
| Orphiucus chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
cool. i am really interested in what would happen next.
update soon :)
| Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
please update soon! theres not many Jyu-Oh-Sei fanfics out there, but this looks good. i cant wait for the next chapter! :D
| Xj9 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
O! Poor Tiz. I hope she'll be okay. And I wonder what will happen next. Update soon!
| 99-xIceQueenx-99 chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Oh, gosh! Please, continue the story, you can't leave it just like this! Please, i'll really apreciate that.
| loli chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
yha...um where is the wrest of the story.
i was kinda looking forward to reading it, all you basically did was tell the story in the summery and gave maybe one difference that didnt happen in the episode.
I would love to see you continue this. :)
| jordanrocksURsocks4ever chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
What happens next! I wrote a fanfic based on this my self but it is more original, it doesnt have any of the characters from the show but the planet is the same.
| beyond the shadows chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
So you saved her life! Good. Now what?
And how can Thor save her? That line made me curious.
| Smile it confusis people chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
PLEASE continue the story, I really wanna find out what happens next so um please finish the story