Reviews for Breaking the World
DragonCurse4 chapter 1 . 6/18
Such a shame you grew bored of this after only one chapter. This could have been really good. :(
WolfReaper75 chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
I think you should write more of the story. Don't just do one chapter!
kyoukochan chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Hey! I finally found a story with Zagi and Tiz! Please update!

Cant wait and hope itll be awesome like this chapter but longer :P
Amy chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
O_O Yes, more, please! I just finished the series today and need to heal my broken heart. You're off to a fantastic start!
j chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
lovely more pleaz!
ROSE PACHAEN chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
the stories realy short but i already can't wait for the next chapter.
Mewdu chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
What? You stopped it there? Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Orphiucus chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
cool. i am really interested in what would happen next.

update soon :)
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
please update soon! theres not many Jyu-Oh-Sei fanfics out there, but this looks good. i cant wait for the next chapter! :D
Xj9 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
O! Poor Tiz. I hope she'll be okay. And I wonder what will happen next. Update soon!
99-xIceQueenx-99 chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Oh, gosh! Please, continue the story, you can't leave it just like this! Please, i'll really apreciate that.
loli chapter 1 . 4/11/2010 where is the wrest of the story.

i was kinda looking forward to reading it, all you basically did was tell the story in the summery and gave maybe one difference that didnt happen in the episode.

I would love to see you continue this. :)
jordanrocksURsocks4ever chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
What happens next! I wrote a fanfic based on this my self but it is more original, it doesnt have any of the characters from the show but the planet is the same.
beyond the shadows chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
So you saved her life! Good. Now what?

And how can Thor save her? That line made me curious.
Smile it confusis people chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
PLEASE continue the story, I really wanna find out what happens next so um please finish the story
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