Reviews for Mistake
01Katie chapter 6 . 8/23/2012
I'm hoping that you update this story ASAFP. I love it and can't wait for more.
katandjasper chapter 6 . 8/20/2012
Hope you do post soon, and try to make the chapters a little longer.
Robin.D chapter 5 . 3/30/2011
that was a good chapter :):):D:D i hope your going to do more with this story :)
Robin.D chapter 4 . 3/30/2011
where did Alice go... good chapter :):):D
Robin.D chapter 3 . 3/30/2011
why is Eddie not going to hunt with Bella... good chapter :):D
Robin.D chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
good chapter :):D
Robin.D chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
good chapter :):D
Mason and Alex chapter 5 . 6/24/2010
keep writing ;D
Conan in love chapter 5 . 1/10/2010
it wasa sad chapter
gottaloveva chapter 5 . 10/26/2009
I am LOVIN the story! I hope to read more SOON!
Kathy Hiester chapter 5 . 10/11/2009
Good story
NCChris chapter 5 . 10/9/2009
WOW! Didn't see that coming! Can't wait to see more...
brooklynsam3 chapter 5 . 10/8/2009
why did emmett have to die?
NCChris chapter 4 . 9/16/2009
I like the premise of the story a lot. The only suggestion I have is to maybe find a beta - they could help you refine the wording and catch grammar issues. It would help with the flow of the story a little. Project Team Beta is a good resource, or maybe ask an author whose work you are inspired by...good luck!
Brenna chapter 4 . 9/13/2009
Don't wrry I will pray for u... Good luck
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