Reviews for Crystal Energy
Figment chapter 20 . 11/11/2016
Great story! Even though it's unfinished, I thoroughly enjoyed what you've written. I really liked how you've handled this crossover. Though Nanoha and Fate are powerful in this universe, you've written it so that there is still 'real' conflict to be resolved and our heroines have to go through problems and grow. Unlike other fics, where the introduced characters are *so* powerful that they are somehow the cure-all for that universe's problems with very little effort. An ending would be much appreciated, but thanks for sharing!
Lord-Sylph chapter 12 . 6/3/2016
I have one small issue, when Fate ordered Bardiche to Set Up, he replied with Raising Heart's reply of "Standby, Ready. Set Up" instead of his usual "Get Set" just a small typo
Guest chapter 20 . 7/28/2015
please come back and update
Grizzmon chapter 20 . 1/26/2015
Well, the sword is usually the idiots choice in these kind of things.
Grizzmon chapter 19 . 1/26/2015
Well, if fanon had teached me something, is that Nanoha doesn't want to be a Queen.
Grizzmon chapter 18 . 1/26/2015
Well, this is gonna be fun!
Grizzmon chapter 17 . 1/26/2015
Big brother to the rescue!
Grizzmon chapter 16 . 1/26/2015
Well, can’t he contact a ship for pick up?
Grizzmon chapter 15 . 1/26/2015
Well, she will eventually leave, right?
Grizzmon chapter 14 . 1/26/2015
Yeah, that happens when you don't think things.
Grizzmon chapter 13 . 1/26/2015
I am sure Nanoha will eventually get her device back.
Grizzmon chapter 12 . 1/26/2015
Well, I wonder how Nanoha is doing?
Grizzmon chapter 11 . 1/26/2015
Uh... so you won't show were they ended up?
Grizzmon chapter 10 . 1/26/2015
Well, teleport?
Grizzmon chapter 9 . 1/26/2015
Well, they are kind of the official couple after all.
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