Reviews for PITCH
Guest chapter 20 . 10/9/2013
That was actually O.O really good chapter! Glad Light thought of a way for Aiber to see L and how much he really does want to be with light and not Aiber! ;} perfect revenge to me
Rei chapter 19 . 10/9/2013
That was perfect with the whole truth or dare but afterwards it just got so crazy! Like O.O what did Aiber to I Light?! Or Light due to Aiber?!
Guest chapter 18 . 10/5/2013
Elevator sex ._. Perfect! Lol oh my god! Fricken aiber, Misa and the chairman for ruining all the plans! At least L and Light are trying to work things out!
Rei chapter 17 . 10/5/2013
*Gasp* Aiber is alive?! or well not dead or in prison! Man! He wants L so bad! Run L! Or Light come and save yo man! I really liked L and Light talking and especially L trying to smile and then copying Light's demure xD
Rei chapter 16 . 9/29/2013
I sorta want Aiber to just disappear but he is a part of the story and I totally forgot about Watari! It's lately been about L and Light and the game of misleading one another.
Rei chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
Seriously I thought Light was part of the yakuza! Him confessing to L was nice but he's still crazy!
Rei chapter 14 . 9/21/2013
My god! Aiber is just getting on my nerves and ruining my beautiful family get together! That was gold Light having to deal with Sayu and Misa all over him and still want L to know he's sorry about them!
Rei chapter 13 . 9/21/2013
Oh these two! Will they ever just go forward wth each other and not let jealousy or anything else get in the way from actually being together and happy?!
Rei chapter 12 . 9/17/2013
Ha I love when a character is thinking aloud. Nice chapter showing some of how both are feeling and just give in!
Rei chapter 11 . 9/17/2013
Aww at first thought L was just gonna get away and drown in his misery after seeing Light and Misa then Aiber came and made out with L! Till Light came and L manipulated him into choosing him or Misa! Nice
Rei chapter 10 . 9/16/2013
I swear Light is just as good as he comes in this fic, playing L like a card so easily! Yet I sorta like this submissive L! Damn Misa ruining the info coming out of Light
Rei chapter 9 . 9/15/2013
Wow Light seriously wants L all to himself and even wants to know who he was talking while they were in the car. Poor L he has a crazy guy in love with him, only thing good is he's hot!
Rei chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
Man is Light obsessed! And wanting to keep L to himself. Getting jealous over L texting Watari and Aiber. He's like just a crazy love sick dude in here with psycho tendencies
Rei chapter 7 . 9/8/2013
Ok xD I died in the beginning when I saw that Soichiro was just thinking L was into politics and that's why he held up a cold front but once Light said he wasn't and Soichiro just turned into a regular dad! I swear I loved that part! I thought he was gonna be like that the whole time! Still I enjoyed this chapter and it sparked my interest. Plus seeing Light so infatuated with L is sweet.
Rei chapter 6 . 9/7/2013
Whoa even I would have freaked and wonder wth Light is if he had every coaster or anything that I had left at the bar! But I don't seem to but the political lobbyist. Seems fishy but hey I love the way Light and L seem so in character
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