Reviews for The Breaking Point
kayla12000 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
didn't like the end they should have gotten together but otherwise it was pretty good
AnNyanimous chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I kinda wish you continued this... But anywho, this was really awesome!

'"Child Raven, daughter of Trigon and Arella, against the advisement of some of the council, I feel it is my duty to inform you that at the moment you are the prime candidate for Azar."

Without turning around or pausing, and in her patented monotone, she replied "Super." The pair flew away without looking back.'

That has got to be my favorite part lol. No BB/Rae story would be complete without some sarcasm from Raven! xD


azxJenS chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
I liked it, the ending was very open; lots of potential.
ThommyPickles chapter 1 . 7/7/2009

i wish that you would've continued it though...