|Reviews for Magnum|
| swallowinthetwilight chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
I can't believe I never reviewed this! I've reread this so many times, and it's definitely one of my favorite ItaSaku AUs! The world you created has such great character (that's meant to be singular FYI), and the way you interspersed flashbacks was brilliant-seamless and moving along the pacing. I just wish there was more of this fic, and this universe! Favorite parts include the conversation they had where Sakura chides Itachi for feeling like he needs to put his life in perspective, Sakura's thinking process as she remembers how she first began investigating Itachi, your creativity in adapting ninja skills to your AU, all the details of setting and costume elements-you just really made it come to life. Serious kudos to you on world-building, pacing, plot, and character interaction. Thanks for writing!
| BoomPowMina chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
I LOVED IT SO MUCH, GOOD JOB!
Oh, and who is the character on your profile picture?
| QUACK3RS chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
what a great read :) very exciting and suspenseful!
| P. Lambert-Jensen chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Once again, very impressive! In-depth and I love the flawless intergration you create with this very alternative genre and the factual NARUTO Shippuden plotline. It's brilliant!
| SomebodyLost chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
Damn. That was... unexpectedly good. Very awesome. Will you make more?
| LS chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
Beautiful ending. Interesting idea! I love AUs like this.
| LS chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
I love your writing style.
| LS chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
You are my very favourite writer on fan fiction, did you know?
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/18/2012
You're an amazingly good writer...
Are you from Canada?
For some reason, all of the good writers on fanfiction are Canadians.
| Shubhs chapter 3 . 6/6/2012
Interesting though it was quite idealistic as well.
| luvtoshi chapter 3 . 9/20/2011
This is a fabulous work! I'm very impressed with the technicalities behind it - the way you have cleverly adapted the cannon jutsus into a modern and very believable technology. Astoundingly done!
It was a fantastic, exciting and very original read, with just the right dose of subtle romance.
Thank you for the fabulous read!
| SwiftKick chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
OK I get it: 45kg at 161 is underweight! THANKS to the multiple people who have pointed this out.
Now go complain to the clueless Japanese author who MADE Sakura have those proportions at age 16.
Also...cannot fight? Anyone with the will to survive and the correct technical and anatomical knowledge can fight. When Sakura fights, she uses the force of her opponents against them. Physics, martial arts, and a medical background makes for a solid fighter.
I clearly wrote that it was not Sakura's pure strength that allowed her to be successfully combative.
| micha chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Nice story ,
but are you aware, that 45 kg at a height of 161 cm are clearly underweight?
There is no way, that a girl with this weight is really able to fight, i'm sorry to say.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2011
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2011