Reviews for Shoulders
TheChronicLiar chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Great story, but the last few lines were what made it amazing!
BFDreaming chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Just a note: according to an article I read a few years ago, not only do women think about sex just as much as men, but do so more efficiently. Previous studies relied entirely on survey data, which is prone to reflect cultural expectations at least as much as reality. This one measured brain activity. ;D
Emerald Gaze chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
that was really cool and i like the idea of that shen gong wu

though chase was right, it's not all that useful

battle wise in the least since the switching sides is only temporary but it was a pretty cool way to see things expressed

i find it hilarious that jack's devil was more terrifying than chase's

maybe it just means jack has the potential to be an even better villan than chase

as for jack's angle i was totally expecting just a mini copy of good jack which it basically is... just less enthusiastic!_!
DragonOfRuby chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
I freaking LOVED this story. You are pure awesome.
1337kitsune chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
You are fucking amazing my friend. I mean really...you rule.

God you rock!
Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Fantastic.
ObsessiveCompulsive5699 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
That was amazing! I laughed out loud several times! It was such an original idea, too-I loved it!

Obsessive
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Aw, I wanted to know which of the little pests - er, I mean the sweet, poor, innocent monks (yes, that's what I mean ') - died. Hehe, Jack's becoming truly evil; it was only a matter of time.
xsmokeandmirrorsx chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Hooray for Freud's twisted views on the human psyche :D In short, I loved it. It was so original and funny and I especailly loved the image of Jack's Id :) Straight into my fav's

xx smoke xx
BookerSeeFoodBookerEat chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Defo one of your BEST stories you've written. I always look forward to your Chack fics and this fic is defo an example of why. This is lovely! The demon ones were freaking me out but thats because I'm more into the romance (which is why I'm in love with the angel chack, that was so beautiful and romantic *sniff* I L.O.V.E how chase was holding Jack in his wings aw they were my favorite bit ) i kept on rushing through the talking so I could hurry up and read what the angel chacks were doing, I'm in love with them :) I REALLY hope another story of your will be Chack being cute and romantic just like the ego-good-wing things. Aw, i can't get over he was cuddling him in his wing *swon* SO CUTE! 3
Shadir chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
I want that Wu, it would be amusing to do the true thoughts of the other ones with those forms.

Neither that to say that it was amusing to see like their versions miniatures were declared and the jaws of the monks passed beyond the floor.