|Reviews for Fabrications|
| The Mad Maiden chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
I really love the way you are portraying GLaDOS. I mean, her trying to figure out how many burnt books constitute a genocide. That was just spooky. The reason you gave for it was an interesting one. Science and absurdity, that would explain her thinking process so well.
Another very enjoyable chapter and it makes you think.
| Wayne7793 chapter 2 . 7/7/2009
I'm not familiar with this game, but this is a rather thoughtful story, I like it.
| The Mad Maiden chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
That was such an interesting premise for the story. I couldn't believe someone would do that to their own daughter. Imagine being turned into a machine.
But Wow. That was, really, really good. I hope you'll continue it.
| Landing Failure chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
This is pretty interesting so far... There's no grammar mistakes or anything as far as I can tell, which is good.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
| confetti chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
This is a really interesting take on the Portal backstory! I'll be looking forward to more.