|Reviews for Controler and the controled|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
I would definitely enjoy some more please and thank you.
| Stranger chapter 2 . 5/27/2015
MORE PLEASE ITS LIKE A GAME OF SEX-CHESS!
| Darrel Kent chapter 2 . 3/6/2015
I like it.
| Zero Gawain chapter 2 . 10/3/2014
| ravenlover96 chapter 2 . 8/9/2014
you have to write more payback is only fair :)
| Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 2 . 10/9/2013
It is just too sad that you have not kept this going. It was fantastic, as was your other ZaGr one shot that I read already. They were written with great stucture and talent. I enjoyed both so much!
| bri chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
please do more waah so awesome -
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
I loved it please do sequels or another chapter
| Sexy music plays chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
(P.S. i know that stupid Alvin and the chipmunks movie said that at one point but the true creator is...RED vs. BLUE!) Oh Yeeeeeeeeeaaaah!
| zengods chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
MORE MORE MORE MORE!
| Unknown213 chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
Next Chapter please _
| J.M.C chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
Work on your spelling
| random reviewer chapter 2 . 11/14/2012
| Unknown D Flamerose chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
lol wow funny rereading things you faved years ago. XD only thing is 23? that would knock most dead.
| Cindy Cerberus chapter 2 . 5/28/2012
There should be more!