Reviews for Joyride
Dragowolf chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
I love how Raoul is just not as predictable as Tracks thought he was. Its fun!
Dragowolf chapter 6 . 5/17/2013
Yes Raoul you did. You did very much so. this made me grin on a day I really needed a grin.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
LOL this was just soooo funny!I fell off my chair laughing the end
autoboticon chapter 5 . 5/19/2012
Hello there,

Loving your fic so far, I hope you can continue with

the story soon!
swift-117-streetracer chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
Lovely story line so far. I enjoyed it so much. Lol, Tracks teasing Raoul. Bonus for stayin' in character.

Holomatter is a win. I was imagining it totally like you were describing how it works.
Merkitten chapter 5 . 5/17/2010
Oh my goodness.

Hahaha, you have completely captured the dynamics of the Raoul-Tracks friendship.

I was laughing so hard throughout. Oh my. xD

What a FANTASTIC job you have done! Thank you!

I sincerely hope there's more, because I'm definitely look forward to it!
Dragowolf chapter 5 . 4/6/2010
I like Track's reasoning for not going after the 'Con. Great work on this! So much fun to read!
flamingmarsh chapter 5 . 4/6/2010
good chapter. :)

and at least Tracks didn't have to battle the Decepticon
Dragowolf chapter 4 . 4/3/2010
Oh this was good! I loved seeing how Tracks interacted with Raoul as a human. It was lots of fun!

Great job!
flamingmarsh chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
this was a good chapter.

I hope you do the second part to this.

and I like how you humanized Tracks :)
knocks chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
Yes, please! Another chapter of them at the car show!
Jalaperilo chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
There are a lot of different interpretations out there when it comes to the humanisation of Transformers. Some are vastly different than others and all are valid in their interpretation. You’re Tracks, however, is perfect! That preppy Harvard daddy-has-money look is just exactly him! I loved this so much, it certainly made my day. The Corvette poster was just icing on the cake!
Nightwind chapter 3 . 3/10/2010
Ah, Tracks. Such a tease. Such a clueless, dirty tease. The last exchange between them was awesome. :)

You write these two very well. I've tried writing this pair in various situations, and I just can't do Raoul justice, try as I might. So I'm glad that *someone* can because there just isn't enough nearly fic out there with these two, in whatever capacity. I look forward to seeing more of these, when the mood/muse strikes you. :)
flamingmarsh chapter 3 . 3/10/2010

this was a funny chapter.

poor Raoul.
Jalaperilo chapter 2 . 1/28/2010
I love this story, especially chapter two! Tracks and Raoul rock!
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