|Reviews for Becoming captain|
| Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
...These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise...
| Lori Jean chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Thank you. This was well written. The interaction between Pike and Kirk was well done on the complicated levels. Thank you again I liked Pike.
| JonAndCompanyOffToFightTheDead chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
A great story. Very good.
| Cheann de na thit chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
aww, awesome, I love this :) especially the second from last line :p very good, emotional and realistic
| Les1 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I love this fic! Like you, I was hoping for more interaction between Kirk and Pike. This is an interesting and totally belivable look at how things could've gone.
| AllieMcD chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
this was great, i felt it was a much needed scene between pike and kirk and i love seeing their relationship, the hug was made of win
| AtanaM chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Thank you for this... it fit seamlessly into the fabric of the movie... like a deleted scene. For all his heroic's Jim Kirk is still a 25 year old kid. He'd need a rudder and a puff of wind to set him in the right direction. Pike was just the one to do that for him.
I loved it.
| Christina TM chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Well hey there-nice work :).
| sootgremlin11 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I really liked this. Pike always did seem very fatherly towards Kirk.