Reviews for The Destiny of Sparda's Descendant
Guest chapter 2 . 1/13
this is the best you came up with? good thing you screwed your shitty little and unimportant story right at the start so i did t have to read this tripe too much... im out of here since your stupidity could be contagious you freak
User chapter 7 . 11/22/2014
Your story is badly written
You bring in Baku and zabuza and you totally forget about them.
You gave naruto so much resources and weapons with excellent teachers and you left him fighting like a genin, with the amount of guns he has he should be able to take care of any ninja he came across in the forest of death even orochimaru, the guns he has are unique and special above all the guns are foreign weapons and which have never been seen before in the elemental nations and so no defence have been built or made for it.
You also give him powerful swords and make him use them anyhow. Yamato alone was enough for him it was said that the sword could cut through anything and is the key to opening the gate of hell. Yet naruto uses the sword like any other Katana.
I am not impressed. Not to mention naruto is a cocky moron.
I AM DONE WITH THIS FIC
Madgormley chapter 21 . 9/29/2014
Excellent story
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
NaruHinaHaku Please!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/2/2014
b1ic1th!
Ace of Hate chapter 6 . 7/23/2014
If you change Chojis "I'm not fat, I'm chubby" to "I'm not fat, I'm fluffy", you'd have a perfect Gabriel iglasias quote.
Rebmul chapter 17 . 7/15/2014
u evil cruel son of a bitch I don't think even the devil himself would make someone listen to that crap
Black shadow chapter 21 . 7/14/2014
This story is ROCK! The only thing that naruto need now is a motorsycle and is PERFECK!
joe chapter 20 . 7/4/2014
I think the story is great but what happened to the devil arm Pandora shouldn't naruto have gotten it dagon or bael I know Dante got it from one of those toads
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
Your an idiot ther are guys that are that good l
wolf chapter 20 . 6/2/2014
hey what happened to the devil arm Pandora?
Guest chapter 12 . 4/16/2014
You made a fucking band out of them? Wow just wow
Guest chapter 10 . 4/16/2014
Where the fuck did naruto learn jazz?
And how many swords are you gonna give naruto?
Its like he has 4 of them
Do you know how hard it is to make disitions in a fight that's as fast as in naruto world and you want him to shuffle between 4 sword all taller then him maybe
And you didn't even discribe naruto properly do you know how creepy it is to imagine someone with naruto's height dating anko?
It's like she is a cradle robber
Guest chapter 10 . 4/16/2014
The story is badly written..
You brought in haku and zabuza in konoha and you totally forgot about their existence? Its like they are dead
You put kin in this story you put her in naruto's home and then forget about her too? What the fuck?
Man when you stop someone from getting killed and change the story you have to bring them in the flow too and not start following canon entirely
I really wished you didn't put hinata in his harem
Guest chapter 5 . 4/16/2014
How will doing physical training in his mind word help him?
Only memory based techniques can be learnt there
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