Reviews for A Whole New Life
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
i know that its been years since you published this but i really would like to read more so if you can please update
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I like it
Heather chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Please continue! I really love it! :D
misskikimarie chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
This is pretty good so far, even if it has only just begun. Great job!
Bryanna chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
OMG for ur first time writing its awesome so far write more please! :)
PinkyMinky3 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
This is seriously AMAZINGG!

So you know what comes next *wink wink* ...


C'mon please, this is seriously awesome!

TICKLES3000 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
oo lala! haha anyway please update this is really good.
CupiditySMH16 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
awesome story! keep it up D
Exmoorpony chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Great so far! Please write more! Aquamarine is my favourite movie and not having something to satisfy my need for a bit of romance is KILLING me. :)
AB967 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Great start! Write more!
Loverofgoodstories27 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
really good chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Goomba chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Well, it's short - and it's very hard to capture an audience in so few words. Certainly the 'idea' for your story has potential (with the obvious exception that Ray is too old for Clair) but you would need to develop the story far more than you have. Create some intrigue, some scene, anything - and give it more power to entice your readers. So far all you seem to have managed is to make poor Clair look pathetic and helpless - and that's not much of a story that I am interested to read. Good luck with your next chapter - Cheers Jen
degrassiiloveyou chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
lol!keep writing!~always,jess
AnimalLover32HaHa chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Aw. Sweet! Anyway, good story! Update soon! I wanna see what happens!
artificialgingersnap chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
great story so far!