Reviews for Worthy of Love
SodiumLamp0nAHill chapter 36 . 9/11/2016
And just as Amanda finally seems to warming up to her family, the plot thickens: dun, dun, dunnnnn! But seriously though, you did a spectacular job writing the story. You really should continue; there's still a LOT of potential left!

As to a review of the story thus far: You've done a wonderful job of portraying the life of an abused/neglected young girl growing into young adulthood, along with the unique challenges of living in a family of vampires. Your attention to detail has really brought the story to life: from the medical terms & equipment, to the different currency used, to all the different types of food, to name a few.

Surprisingly, your take on the Cullens (with changing the ages and dates, as well as leaving out Edward) worked really well. Both of your OCs are REALLY well thought out & characterized, and ALL characters involved are extremely believable, even down to how the different characters view, interact, & respond with each other. To be honest, I've never thought about how the Cullens would look (both as a family and individually) to a kid, and you did a great job exploring that.

Well done, and thanks for sharing your God-given talent for writing! I hope to read more in the future!
Tiffaney chapter 36 . 12/26/2015
Hi I came by your story a couple days ago and just finished chapter 36 now. I think it's really good and you should continue writing. I saw you haven't updated in a couple years and was wondering if you are ever going to finish it I really hope you do I would love to read the rest!
Jenn chapter 12 . 11/1/2015
Hi Marrabelle
Sorry I never leave any review because I'm too busy clicking "Next" button! Your story is enticing and I love it! I think you should publish it as a novel since I would be sure buying it!

Guest chapter 4 . 10/25/2015
I love it
Amy Hamato chapter 36 . 11/18/2013
Can't wait for more. I'm really hooked on this story
Debbie93 chapter 36 . 4/21/2013
Ouh...I really love your story so please please update the next chapter...! PLEAAASE...!
Haruchan-chan chapter 36 . 1/7/2013
I love the plot. My opinion, you don't have to consider it 'cause it's just a thought, Edward would have probably made the funny situations more funny because of how easily he reacts to Emmett and Jasper's teasing.
Swell-Socks chapter 32 . 4/15/2012
Hey I have an idea for you: why don't you mak it so Amanda has to have surgery and she scared but doesn't want to admit it to Carlisle, and she runs awat from Carlisle in the hospital? You would do a great job with this and for those who are interested in medical dramas will enjoy it. (: btw love your story it us full of great ideas and u inspire me! Thanks for the read, where would we be without the twilight fanfics of the world? Lol and I like ur scence if humor is funny. XD
lirio de amor chapter 35 . 2/5/2012
Yay I found a chapter I hadn't reviewed! I miss talking to you all the time! Are you going ever update this story? It misses you:)
Tigeress-Jayde chapter 36 . 2/12/2011
You haven't updated this story in a while... I think you should if you have time... i was really enjoying this story even if it was a little bit rushed...

Oh "X is going to be the rate of the reaction, and Y is going to be temperature," Is incorrect... Im a bit of a nerd when it comes to math and science and while i found other mistakes through you story this one irritated me the most...

Temperature goes along the X axis because it is the independent variable... The dependent variable goes along the y axis... The rate of reaction depends on the temperature... it will be faster or slower DEPENDING on the temperature... I hope that helps for future graphs you do...

I was really enjoying this story... one of the reasons i do believe is because the is no Edward and Bella... It is a nice change... I believe you should continue on with this story it is quite well written and i can see you skills improve as the story continues.

MoJay chapter 36 . 1/15/2011
Great chapter - lots of emotions! So Susie's investigation is stirring up a world of chaos - for Amanda & Alice! The suspense is killing me - update PLEASE!
TeamCarlisleandEsme8 chapter 7 . 12/28/2010
Uh oh
TeamCarlisleandEsme8 chapter 6 . 12/28/2010
Loved it
TeamCarlisleandEsme8 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Loved it
Lovewarorwhatever chapter 36 . 12/5/2010
I luv it :D
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