|Reviews for A Holiday for Piccolo|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
cool, that was very ... interesting, but yea, piccolo is like a second dad to gohan so that really makes sense
| ImagingThings chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Nice. Yeah, I figure spending the day sparring would be just something Gohan and Piccolo would do...
| Animecartooncomicgirl chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
sweet love it i love stories like this
| Destiny Girl 15 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Aw, it was great! I loved it!:D
| goldenpaw chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
so cute! i loved it
| animefan018 chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
AW! That was toooo cute! ONe of the best Piccolo and Gohan stories I've read! YOu really esablished their relationship! LOVED the secret picture, wish that actually happened!XD
| OneWingedSeer chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
For critique, I have a dialog change request.
Right there at the end where Piccolo says “Yeah, and um, I had fun today, thanks" it didn't sound Piccolo-ish. I'm thinking something more like: Hey kid. We'll try it again sometime. or something more like that.
But over all it was a cute one time thing. Liked it.
| sesshomarurin1990 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
i liked it it was a good heart worming story
| callietitan chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
this story is so CUTE! i love it, please write some more stories about piccolo and gohan! in fact, i will go check if you already have! i will be faving this once i sign in later! :)
| Amiko-san chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Very cute story. As if it isn't obvious I adore Piccolo/Gohan fluff. Sweetness. I look forward to more.
| X's For Eyes chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
I want to see that picture so badly now! I'll bet it's adorable! Maybe I'll draw it...
As much as I love Gohan/Goku stories, Gohan/Piccolo's still give me the warm fuzzies in their own very special way. What a sweet fanfic for Father's Day. Good job!
| HikarinoTenshi2879 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
why of course, When Goku died a first time Gohan just met Piccolo a first time, lolz Goku is dead and Gohan is strong so yea. and the pulling into the water is from one of the 7 days break eps with Goku and Krillin (agh sp?). lol so yea.
It's a fun one.
| chikyu chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
cute story! And the holiday project sounds fun! I mean get to celebrate for a day some prob un celebrated much or other contry holiday, talk about bring to life hisory and culture!
| Misato Pen chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Nice fic, its lovely :)
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I liked it! It was so sweet!