Reviews for Underneath the Surface
life is short so am I chapter 1 . 9/17
Wahh, it's so cute! Though I'm not really into yoai smut, I do enjoy this pairing.
Moonpuzzle chapter 1 . 2/24
Congratulations! I think this was my 15th time reading this through on a random occasion. From the time this story popped out to our lovely present time, I believe that your story has been read the most out of all the others I've come by!

And I have to say, still enjoyed tearing up and laughing. Love the serious mood in the office only to be...ignored...yup. The mental image of a Kakashi running out of the building followed by a broken desk is always priceless. Then to get the conclusion of Naruto being allowed passage to higher ranks because of a scary Kakashi is lovely

Thanks again for writing this story! I'll be reading it again when it crosses my path in the future.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
great story, you did everything well ad this is my fav
mochilera chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Linda historia, me gustan la personalidad que das a los personajes.
Zesslover chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
This is an amazing story and I would love to read more stories like this one.
demonsnight chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
I thought that it was totally adorable.
Teacuppy chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Thank you so much for this story, this is one of my favorite pairings, it's shame that it isn't very popular :-) You wrote this so well, it's believable and their moment when they hook up is very passionate...amazing.
LongShadyEyes chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
This was truely amazing ) I love ever little bit of your story XDD.
Thanks so much for the wonderful read!
lovleydragonfly chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS AWESOME! I'm rooting for a sequel!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
first version? well whatever. awesome story. it was beautiful though i would like to see sasuke teme and sakura bi**h's face when naruto becomes a jounin.
muffins chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
This is so good good it left me speechless i have no words to describe how epic this is
Shadowfey913 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
This story is fantastic! Thanks for choosing to share it.
kirallie chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Loved it!
bookgeek2.0 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
i love this story so much kakanaru is really under appreciated. you made their story's and personalities believable and I flowed really well throughout. there heart to heart made want to cry T.T

oh and I can totally see why naruto forgot the book I forget crap all the time when I checking out random noises in my house
Hilario chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Great story C: - Not too angsty or depressing; it's a completely plausible scenario. Only little issue I had was that did he FORGET about that? On the floor. In the open. Anyway...well written, interesting, and creative. Lovely ending, too!
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