Reviews for Unexpected
Sertori Cullen chapter 24 . 8/12
hahahaha I swear every time I saw Emmett's comment about the mutant children I laughed hysterically lol
corteznutterz1 chapter 12 . 2/4
great chapter!
corteznutterz1 chapter 11 . 2/4
haahaa alice is funny!
corteznutterz1 chapter 9 . 2/4
loving this story! Especially knowing she has that support…apart from edward haahaa
crazy4twilight1901 chapter 23 . 5/14/2015
I liked the chapter a lot and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love the name Damon by the way
crazy4twilight1901 chapter 12 . 5/14/2015
Really sweet chapter, I loved it
crazymonkeylover11111111 chapter 24 . 10/12/2013
Why not finish
1 TWILIGHT fan chapter 24 . 9/14/2013
It's so good PLEASE CONTINUE
tashii.davenport chapter 24 . 8/26/2013
Why did you stop here? Please write more! Your story is so good and well-written, and I really want to read more about Victorias plans:)
Hannah chapter 24 . 8/12/2013
:( So you end the story on a cliff hanger, and don't continue it?! Evil little writer :)
Guest chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
I know it's too late but I recommend
Girl: Renesmee (Renee Esme put together)
Boy: EJ (Edward Jacob)
Hannah chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
I am loving this story... it's probably the best version of this Ive ever heard! You're doing pretty good with your writing... I know this story is already finished... but keep on writing! Other songs it doesn't matter... you're an amazing writer and I encourage y ou to continue writing!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/12/2013
Write more chapters
twihearter4evr chapter 24 . 6/19/2013
I heart this! Please update...soon.
India chapter 24 . 6/17/2013
More plz
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