Reviews for Adjustment
Rex Splode chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
This is a interesting short little FF. Kinda progressing fast, compared to some of my other fav FF about these 2, but I'm enjoying it so far.
AKissAndAGunshot chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
I'm really liking this story, but it seems it's been dead for a year...:(
Kairan1979 chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
Great! Laura's reaction to surprise party is very in character!

I wonder what Debbie and Logan are going to think about each other.
Shadow Hand Zealot chapter 4 . 10/24/2009
Well I'm officially interested in this story. I read Caught! and figured the circumstances of how they got there ought to be interesting. So far I seem to be right.

Good characterization, everyone is believable and matches up well with the comics.

Looking forward to more.

onelildustbunni chapter 4 . 9/7/2009
"His own family history took up the rest of the period, because his Irish grandparents never knew the word birth control."

lololol good stuff :-)
Kairan1979 chapter 4 . 9/7/2009
Talk about luck - Laura as a partner for the assignment.

P.S. I thought Debra and Megan lived under different names?
kshrimp chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
I really like this so far. Poor X23 she's so sad. Update soon.:)
Kairan1979 chapter 3 . 8/11/2009
Oops! Santo just couldn't ask to borrow homework three minutes later!

Please update!
Laura X-23 chapter 3 . 8/7/2009
You know, I think Laura only cuts herself because she thinks she needs to do that because when something wasn't perfect with the mission in the facility Kimura torture her so maybe she think she needs to be torture when she failed... I don't know she's been brain washed and programmed by being hurt if she fails the mission so as a good soldier when no ones around to do it to her she does it to herself
Laura X-23 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Really cool!


Kisses from your Brazilian fan!
zackslacker18 chapter 3 . 8/6/2009
Great to see an excellent chapter of this story
Kairan1979 chapter 2 . 7/23/2009
Interesting idea, of using pendant to help Julian learn more about Laura's past. I wonder what is Blindfold up to?

Please update!
onelildustbunni chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
"Once he placed them in her bag, he made towards the direction where his clone ran, slapping Hellion upside the head on the way.

“Ow! Fuck!”

“Moron,” muttered Logan as he exited the cafeteria."

Got a lol out of me. Interesting idea, involving the pendant. Keep it up, not enough Julian/Laura fics out there.
ONIX-21 chapter 2 . 7/1/2009
Yay! another awesome chapter!

loving this story so far

aw he broke it!

looking forward to reading more

hope u update soon! XD
zackslacker18 chapter 2 . 7/1/2009
keep it up
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