Reviews for Naptime
Margo Taux chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
To say “sad” and “beautiful” is just not reasonable, I don’t think I’ll be able to write a worthy analysis like this story deserves. There are no accurate words to label my feelings after reading this, I’m deeply sorry for the lame attempt of a review.
pansymoomalfoy32 chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
Well, it was extremely difficult to read the second half of this through tear blurred eyes, but I managed.

Srta. Sophie Brief chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
...Mi corazón se para... :c es muy triste T_T Trunks murió uwu T_T ¿Porqué? Estos niños están muy unidos
Tearhart chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
Damn the feels
Dynamos chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
This is the worst fic I've read in my life. Yet, at the same time, it is one of the best ones. You literally tore my heart into pieces, threw every piece into a fireplace and then throw a nuclear bomb at it. And you made me tear up. This is so well written it should get an award, and you got Goten just in character. The reading was enjoyable... well, kind of, and the little clues you left for us the readers to dicover what was going on with Torankusu were a very nice detail.
Now that I've finished the review, I guess I'll curl into a ball and cry all night while I drown my sorrows in sad romance stories and a tube of ice cream.
Thanks for the heartbreak (and the reading),
Kurami Rocket chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
Hskwkwkwkkwke. I think. I think my heart just broke. At first I thought, maybe for some weird reason they were drifting apart and then things would get talked out and it would be okay. Idk where the hell, I got that idea from, but...

This, this was so sad. Omg D':
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Well just rip my fucking heart out why don't you!
Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Aww! Poor Goten! Dear, dear Goten.

This is piece is sad, very sad indeed... and so beautifully- written! Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Dear heavens he died didn't he. Aw man.
Dbzhorsegirl chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Awwwww. I'm crying! If I were there I'd be hugging Goten like there's no tomorrow. I feel so bad! Why doesn't anyone tell him? How would they?
"Why doesn't Trunks want to play anymore? Why is he sleeping so much?"
"Goten, honey. Trunks fell asleep and can't play anymore." His mom said crying.
"But why can't you just wake him up?" Goten responded frowning.
"Trunks is asleep...*tears streaming down her face*...and he's never gonna wake up." Chichi then pulled Goten into a soft hug.
Then Goten started crying into his mothers shoulder confused. "But mommy, why not? It's boring without him." He knew. Deep down he knew what had happened but would never accept.
CherryPie13 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
(My heart.)
orangepumpkins chapter 1 . 6/13/2013

I am currently a ball of feels that cannot function because of you.
RikuIsKing chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
-Letting the tears fall. This was such a sad, but very beautiful piece.

-{Things are never boring when you're around.} I liked how you kept repeating that same line a couple of times. Because it shows Goten's childhood and how a child thinks.

-{See, everyone is in black, and mommy is crying and my dad looks like he wants to and Gohan looks real sad too.} If that didn't give any triggers as to what had happened to Trunks. And I'm kinda mad too. Because I'll never know how Goten found out, and how he lived with it.

{"Shenlong" and "natural causes,"} I like how you gave me, as the reader the pieces to understand what had happened to Trunks without saying to much. Nice job at "Show not tell"

Really I could go on and on about how beautiful this was and it was amazing!

-Love, Riku
ShireWulf chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
I'm tearing up... That was beautiful.
SqueeFreak chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Oh! I almost started crying while I read this! T_T This is wonderfully written! *goes off to sob in the corner*
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