|Reviews for Stargate: Return of the Ancients, Season 1, Ep 5|
| Ov3rwatch chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
Live the series so far, one inconsistency though. In the Stargate SG1 episode "48 hours", they reveal that the kawoosh happens as a means of clearing the pattern buffer, which was why they needed to open the gate without the kawoosh in order to get tealc out. So it isn't just for clearing obstruction.
| davycrockett100 chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
| edboy4926 chapter 5 . 4/24/2013
Merlin remains me of the God Emperor of Mankind did with the Primarchs.
| Beyogi chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
This story is super captivating. I somehow hope that Earth doesn't stay the badguys, but it's nice to see they're not the saviors of the universe for once.
Thank you for writing,
| AliMay chapter 5 . 3/12/2012
Awesome! I was hoping they would go back to earth. Great work keep it up!
| Olaf74 chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
Please continue this fantastic series!
| oldman543 chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
| XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 5 . 10/26/2011
wow that was pretty amazing you really are a great story teller I love where your going with this. I clap my hands to you bravo!
| XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 4 . 10/26/2011
cool Dr JD has joined the good side one can only hope sam and meredith mecay will see the light too
| XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
lol doh from homer simpson lol Awesome chapter well the mission didn't go as pland for john but he won 10 bucks though so he can get the good stuff yay :)
| XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 2 . 10/26/2011
Awesome story but what about the candy?
| XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
There going to earth but why is it safe? what about teyla? maybe ryan can make her a replicator nanny
| Pokethat chapter 5 . 8/31/2011
I still say there should be lightsabers
| jtjaforever chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I've liked this so far, but I have to say that this does not feel like the Teyla I know and love. Yes, she would want to protect, maybe even be torned by the need to be Torren's mother but she would never consider him being in the safety of his room more important than anyone else's life or the time she spent with him. If that was the case then her talk to Sheppard after the events of Spoils of War; the conversation in Quantine; her speech to Sheppard in the Queen or he actions in The Prodigal would not have made sense. If anything she would cherish the rare moments they would have together knowing that there could given any given mission gone wrong be a time she would never see her child again...this is the *Teyla* I know.
As a *good* mother and I do consider Teyla a *good* mother we will fight to protect our own. Sometimes the needs of the many may have to out way the needs of the few, or in this case the one but I don't think Teyla's regrets being a mother to Torren would have translated as such from Teyla...JMO.
| MalSer chapter 5 . 8/7/2010
As I read through the various chapters I've found myself impressed by how you've fleshed out the Aterra/Lantean back story and also opened new possibilities/directions for the future. Good job keeping it interesting and entertaining.