|Reviews for Thought Process|
| whitestsky chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
| HeroSpirit chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
This... is a story?
It really doesn't seem like it, you need to post this in a forum rather than posting it as a story
| kjdkueiujsdkj chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
OHMYGOD! People make fanfics of this? I LOVVE YOU!
...normally I'm much more articultate. ]
| D. M. Russo chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
It sucks! No offence but it SUCKS! S.U.C.K. Okay it's not that bad but it sounds like a comentary from a kid. So for tips:
1: Make that story flow more. it's really rough but you have an out-line.
2:More descriptive words.
| Ehh chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Didn't fancy it too much. It was from the view of Hazumu and didn't seem much like him. :/
| Jakessj3 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
hey i really think this is good i can't wait for you to write some more. so keep it up
| Fanboy chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
This is an utter waste of valuable human time... And it should burn in hell, with its creater along with it... Te he...
| 5 years of fun chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
pls continue this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter
| Renrin Taiho chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Aww, come on! It's so short! I want, no..NEED more. Poor Hazumu. This is really funny. Please write more. ~Renrin
| Kyuun chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I'm curious about this story... There's not much to this intro though but I can't wait for more! I've waited for ever for a KashiMashi story!X3