Reviews for The Wrong Sense
mikaela Jean chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
would be a perfect SONG!
U No WHO chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Dal! THats superb! I loved every minute of it! FABULOUS!
JazzyLuver chapter 1 . 6/30/2009

rainfall91 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
i really, really like this. so true to description-simple language, simple meaning-but it conveys so much beyond that. i like how it rhymed, but actually made sense-it wasn't just rhyming for the sake of it. the choice of words really convey the situation, and the ending is so tragic but beautiful.
ScarletWinter chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Good rhyming. Sounds almost like a song. I could feel the emotions as tangible as the air. The short, terse lines add rhythm to the poem.