|Reviews for Closer|
| MillyDenty chapter 4 . 10/15
I'm soo in love with this story
| Fukari chapter 24 . 9/20
I think i agree with you about Shikamaru's sexy eyes..I really like him..kyaa! I enjoy this story so much so I want to continue reading..can't wait to read how this story end!
| GoTherka chapter 31 . 8/28
it doesn't make sense Reiko is this old, Ino said three days in the realm equal few hours here, so why is he ten after what must have been a few months top? And I would never be able to see him as my son, only about six years younger, that's just creepy. Family, little brother, sure, but son? uh... I think you made him too old...
| GoTherka chapter 28 . 8/27
Itachi wants her to tell Sasuke the truth after he kills him? That's cruel, Sasuke will hate her for deliberately withholding what happened. We saw in canon how it destroyed him and he started to hate practically everything except nii-san, I don't think his love for Ino would change anything. She should be more concerned about it... And Itachi here is too temperamental and easily riled up, it's weird xD but I'm glad you just skimmed through the pregnancy. Though I was sure Ino would not be happy about expecting, she said she didn't like kids, so having one when she's fifteen or sixteen and be fine with it is something I just can't understand...
| GoTherka chapter 26 . 8/27
Yeep I was just waiting for this to happen, it was quite obvious. Well shit, I don't envy her, poor girl...
| GoTherka chapter 25 . 8/27
I totally understand Ino's actions, it's very human, but I still find it despicable. I don't know if Asuma will appreciate someone had to die for him. And it wasn't willingly because the guy was under the jutsu. Into feels grateful for his secrefice but it was her who secreficed his life. So I don't like she really used that and doesn't even feel dirty. But hey, ninja... Sometimes their logic is just screwed xD
| PepsiColaa chapter 1 . 4/16
YEAH THAT WAS ME WHO LEFT THE "WHAT THE HELL" REVIEW lol.
So i'm not going to review chap by chap bc i'm too lazy. But Let me start off my saying that I'm not the biggest Sasuino fan. It's either hit or miss for me. Part of it is bc of Kishimoto's idolization of Sasuke's character (to the point of risking Ino's character into OOC territory- the IT dream anyone?), some antis who like to throw sakura under the buss (sasuino/sasuhina would have been much better!) and well sasuke himself is so unshippable sometimes to me. ejem ok/rant.
I would give my right arm and foot for this to be canon.. ok? xD Sure it got little annoying that you went into the cliche of Ino not being attracted to Sasuke at first. I recognize she started off as vain and liking Sas goes into that territory so I tend to dislike it when writers dissmiss it. But you had her playing a little dirty against Sakura (the hair thing) and eventually liking him in a very shounen kinda way (hehe) so i let it slide lol. I like that you made Ino powerful but not powerful enough to take over team 7 or the story u know? you kept the "vitals" of the canon story. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship, Naruhina (yas!) AND the Itasasu bond. I do felt a little annoyed at Reiko sometimes bc if found it hard to believe he was a 10 year old... he sounded way older sometimes. But I guess Uchiha geniuses are precocious? hmm. And I love machista Sasuke lmao. He gets so easily jelly of Shikamaru and Itachi good lord. my biggest let down is that this story is complete.. how? how can u leave it like that? (x2) I wanted to see more, like the Ino clone, second uchiha child (that was risky Sas, couldn't you want until after the war?) Sasuke no longer wanting to live in the Leaf and how will Ino and Reiko deal with that (i'm guessing not the same way Sakura and Sarada do.. lol)
anyways I'm still favoring this lol.
| Guest chapter 45 . 4/16
What?HOW CAN U LEAVE IT LIKE THAT ? WHAT THE HELL?ill be login back later for a more extensive rvw bc ohmygod
| DeadlyPrincess17 chapter 3 . 3/30
Real acc. I'M TOO LAZY TO LOG IN OKAY? DON'T JUDGE ME HAHA
HHNNNGGGG! Ughhh make the butterflies in my tummy stop! This story is turning me into a ball of giggles aaargh this story is too effin good dammit! haha!
| DeadlyPrincess17 chapter 1 . 3/29
Real acc. Remember me?
Hey, yeah, it's me! Guess what?
I'm reading this story again HAHAHA I'm obsessed! I have to read this again. I don't think i'll ever get tired of this story wowza
Sending lots of love,
| DeadlyPrincess17 chapter 45 . 12/23/2015
Real acc. Remember me?
Hey, yeah, it's me! Guess what?
I read it agaaaain! Ta-da! HAHAHA
I probably sound like a weird obsessed reader but yeah, I read it again. Guilty as charged. Awe, it's amazing how your story still has the same effect on me. I laughed and cried and laughed and screamed like banshee and spent sleepless nights and blushed and awed and cried and cried and cried. No matter how much I read this, it's still as beautiful as the first time I read it. Awe bleh too sappy? Hahaha im sorry c: but its true! This story is amazing! YOU are amazing awe c: Very psyched for the sequel! You doing good there? Take care love! Hugs and kisses muah!
| CrescentMoon10 chapter 23 . 8/27/2015
Hahaha Aio is such a pain he really annoys the hella outta Ino and he is such a great disguiser must be from hanging around with too many Uchihas, I wanna know what this genjutsu will be about & it still has perked my curiousity as to why Itachi wants to show her all this?...
| CrescentMoon10 chapter 22 . 8/27/2015
Ohhhh I really loved this arc too but yh I guess her mission is half-sucess half-failure not totally bad but not everything went the way according to plan hmmm..
| CrescentMoon10 chapter 21 . 8/27/2015
Rei is soo rude like at the breakfast table seriously but Orochimaru didn't seem too phased by it which is even creepier *shudders*, and Naruto and Sakura are closer to their rescue mission...
| CrescentMoon10 chapter 20 . 8/27/2015
UGh KABUTO PUT A SEAL ON INO, the very thought makes me cringe well at least she is healthy, other than that this chapter was very graphic if you know what I mean...
But Karin is totally no match for Ino