Reviews for Kara and Lee do it right
kitcat19us chapter 4 . 11/1/2009
really great story
Lerrydia chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Thanks for the feedback! You're right about the Algae planet - and you're the first person who's picked that up! I have fixed it now, no more jarring miscontinuity ... glad you enjoyed :)
ddt73 chapter 4 . 7/18/2009
Great story I loved it. Definitely the way it should have been handled. Thank you so very much for this. :)

On a side note, Kara did not die on the Algae planet that planet went away when that sun near it went super nova. She died on a gas giant they were orbiting when they doing refueling operations.
StarryEyedGlimmer chapter 3 . 7/17/2009
This is definitely Kara and Lee doing it right. This is the way it should have been. Them both coming together and taking out their love, hate, anger and passion out on each other. Exploring their emotions and fears and wants.

Thanks for the story. Looking forward to more. TTFN.
setivalen chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
This was beautiful, perfectly capturing the rage and the love and the spectrum of everything in between. Vivid imagery, well-written, with tight phrasing and convincing pacing. The characterizations are spot-on. I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing your talents! Nicole