|Reviews for Fact Versus Truth|
| itxprincessxlala chapter 4 . 1/13
This story was perfect in every way possible - loved it and incredibly well written!
| Onee-san chapter 4 . 12/1/2016
This was very well done. In response to your author's note in the last chapter, vulcans can have sex outside of pon farr. It's brought up in TNG and I believe Enterprise. I enjoyed your characterizations of both Spock and Uhura. You captured their voices very well. A lot of fanfiction has Spock's emotions just boiling beneath the surface, and the way I see Vulcans (and half-Vulcans) is how you portrayed it. The emotion is there, analyzed, and logic files it away. Also Uhura is a calm individual. Passionate yes, but in a quiet reserved way (at least that's my impression from TOS and the movies). Very nicely written.
The only thing that really bothered me was the incorrect placement of Spock's heart. I understand you knew it was not canon and were going for imagery, but it still bugged me. The human liver is a bit higher than people think. It's just below the pectoral muscles, and I would think you could hear a vulcan heart beat on the chest, side and back (you can hear a human heartbeat in chest and back), so there could be a lot of options to play with. But you're allowed some creative license so I will let it go. :)
I've noticed in some reviews people have commented negatively about the lack of sex in this story. I just wanted to say considering the characters and the length and depth of their relationship, I think you've moved the physicality along at a very appropriate pace.
I know it's been years at this point, but I would love to see a new installment of this mini-series you have. Or separate fanfiction in this genre. You do very good work. I hope to see more from you. I might have to check out that Sherlock story. :)
| 4447777 chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
loved this story sooooo much, if you ever come back to ff, please write more Spock/Uhura goodness! :)
| xxxlenaleexxx chapter 4 . 7/24/2016
This is just...the best! I enjoyed it so much! Thank you!
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/28/2015
I found your story to be quite refreshing in its portrayal of the characters so accurately. I really thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It's not often a story gets my heart racing, or eyes to well up but to me the subtlety of their interactions is what made this a great read.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/9/2015
I personally think Spock and Nyota aren't meant for each other and if Nyota wants more than Spock is willing to give than she can go jump in the lake! Spock needs someone who can understand and accept him so Move over Uhura its my turn!
P.S Sorry if you found this offensive but its my opinion love the story though amahzing!
Could you teach me how to write PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!
| Nibbstheninja chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Your right bout da liver thing that would look rediculos!
| Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 4 . 5/19/2015
| Nice one chapter 4 . 11/26/2014
Spock is half human. Allow him to experience passion. He is not a bloody robot.
| lulusophia95 chapter 4 . 6/20/2014
Perfect again! I cant believe I am reading this after you posting this 5 years ago... Please please continue the story, I am so engrossed by it! Awesome job!
| DannysGardenerKeith chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Read all of them, I just love them so much! I especially liked that last chapter, soo gripping.
Please, please, please write more!
| TOSoldtimer chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
Loved it! And the prequel. Your take on Spock and his motivations is wonderful. I know it's been awhile, but you could always write a sequel.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
Amazing. Please continue this story, you are a wonderful writer and I love how slow they are taking it!
| Jane.knight.knight chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
Okay I loved the story but 2 things 1. She could have been laying in her lap and she still would have heard his heart beat with out having to anger the cannon beast 2. Vulcans can have sex in between Pon Farr just can't have kids out side of it
P.S if you say spock has a bludg in his pants that is not correct because the have retracting junk
| VFell4 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
I like how you explain why you chose where Spock's liver was. (I'm very glad your inner writer won btw)