Reviews for To Stop Me
socialgirl378 chapter 1 . 3/5
What... what the FUCK?! *shocked beyond*
Vex: What the hell did we just read?
No, no... This reminds me way too much of Undertale. I'm done. That's it, I'M DONE! *leaves*
Vex: I think it's safe to say that you just crushed us in the feels.
YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
That's pretty messed up indeed.
Chise Sakamoto chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
anonymous chick chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
I WANT MORE! Like, what if Clockwork has gotten so attached to Danny that he had to interfere and sent Danny to an alternate dimension where Danny didn't exist or Amity didn't and the JL never got a video and are tasked with keeping Danny good because CW sort of has a grudge against them for killing Danny in the original dimension.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
I would like more
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
I won't more
secretwhovianpony chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
You... you liked Danny? Why! Why would you do that? You have utterly broken my feels! How dare you! Wwwhhhhaaaa!
animegal1357 chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
what more do u have
RandomCitizen chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Length is spelled incorrectly in the summary, and you left out the important word "don't" in J'onn's sentence so he said "I hope we have to do that". Or something. :P Also, please leave a line break between the end of the story and that little bit in the end. It was jarring after reading the fic.(which felt had ended too quickly after the set up before, more description?)

So, good oneshot, but could be better I think. :3
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
what the hell... he just gave up...

what kind of hero is that...
SilverWolf01 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
why did he die
Lady Randomosity chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
You should write a sequel about that day
Inviso-Al chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Yuu3 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Aww...but, this is better. Somehow, it's better than any other endings I read.
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