Reviews for First Kiss
GaaraOfTheSand18 chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Continue, I'll like to read it and see what ever happen in a sasuke and hinata love story. It'll be interesting and like no other!:)
Dotchi13 chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
I loved it :)
I mean, sure I didn't really like how Sasuke took advantage of the situation, but I like it.
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Meh
Meiwa Chinmoku chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Cute. I like it. :)

"I wanna kiss you," he whispered.

Hinata bit her lower lip as she tried to look away.

"I might be bad at it," she whispered back.

He smirked and shook his head.

"Not possible."

That scene is actually very familiar to me. Because I've watched the movie for over a hundred times, and read the book from cover to cover, I knew that this was from 'A Walk to Remember'. One of the cutest scenes where Landon said, 'I might kiss you' then Jamie replied, 'I might be bad at it.'

'That's impossible.'

Kawaii! I'll make sure to read your other works later on.

Maybe my only suggestion is a beta - I could spot some grammatical mistakes, nothing too big, but it would be better if someone checked into that.
hinata-fan2 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
kawai its one of the sweetest story i have read
loveisgolden chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
oh
TaeYi chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
i love the story can you make it into a chapter its sound a great idea for one!~
Queen of the angels chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
OMFG! that was so INTENSE! Don't stop on the goos parts! keep on goin!