Reviews for The Petite Swan
B1193 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
loved the one shot

wondering where the other parts are?
durteelilsecret chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
This is one of those moments where I REALLY wish I was Bella.

Btw, what are the other parts of the series? For some reason I can't seem to find them.

Keep up the great work though!
k1942 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Somehow don't think Edward is going to file sexual harassment charges against Bella any time soon. Probably dented his manly pride just a bit to find out who she was, but I'm thinking he should have paid more attention when Charlie was telling him things. Regardless, this is a very hot beginning, hope the rest is as much fun to read.
sakurarwr chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
I'm re-reading a lot of your stories. I really enjoyed this one shot because you portray Bella as this all-knowing seductress. Where are the three companions to this one shot? I would love to read them and see how useful the other locations are to Edward and Bella.
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
LOVE this :)

Where are the other parts? I would really love to read them :D

Love the fact that cocky Bella overides cocky Edward. :P
Irishyoga chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Is this finished anywhere else? I really like confident bellas
EdwardCullenizor chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Awesome. I love it.
denisemexicana chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
great story, i hope you add really soon
smultron6 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
deleteteled chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
love it! where are the othe rparts to the story?
Ef-Ef-Addict chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
wow edward got played :) but im sure he loved every second of it :)
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
haha! i loved it.. it was amazzing... and Daddy's office.. they are badd! haha! i love it! cant wai for more! this sounds like it is going to be good.. which i have no doubt will be! haha! later! D
Twilight-boo chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I will like 2 read more 2 this one shot
dolhpin33 chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Love it, can't wait to read more.
Bella1283 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
God, another story from you that i love to read!

Your a great writer, go on with this!
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